ziggy

Sep 19, 2009 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

FAIRY FORTS / RING FORTS

In the distance on
the hills fairy forts
formed in rings
choked in brambles
lost in time amidst
their reason lays a line .

An age old power sprung
forth formed a flower spirit
light once all in sight, then
now a myth

Pagan passages in pagan
times has formed mystic
twisted find .

— ziggy, Sep 19, 2009

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Candlewitch

16 years 10 months ago

Dear Edd

Delightfully enchanting. I can see it in my mind's eye and I would love to be there in what you describe. Nothing about this poem needs improving, from where I sit. Always, Cat

ziggy

16 years 10 months ago

hi cat

enda, patrick collins. hello again , your comments mean so much to me i always look out for them thank you so much ireland is covered in forts , and you can see one from another except where they have been removed which is a shame always nice to hear from you thanks again always ziggy x

lyz

16 years 10 months ago

Ziggy, Ziggy, Ziggy

First, spell check, :the c in chocked, Choked. Forth, you left out H, and now down to earth. i loved this, it took me back to my younger, way younger, age of story telling. I could sit for hours listening to this sort of tale. A rello actually has gone back to the way of the pagan, interesting stuff, she is a wiccan and even though she does not say a lot about her practices and beliefs, she has the most gentlest soul, when she was young, she was a bitch. But we all need something to believe in and I believe I love this piece. Love Lyz. XX

ziggy

16 years 10 months ago

lyz lyz lyz

enda, patrick collins. I changed the C in choked , big oops i cant trust spell check , and fairy FORTS is spelled as so as far as i know there is no h in it i even did a serch to make sure , i cant belive i did that back to school for me and stand in the corner , lol , fairy forts date back to the iron age here and when i heard about someone digging one up i wrote this i was not a happy monkey when i found that out many thanks for the read and all chat soon ziggy

lyz

16 years 10 months ago

Hi

I am sorry, I meant the fort where you were meant to write spring fortH. I see you fixed it anyway. I did not let you know properly. You oughta be proud of this one, I really enjoyed it. I thought before I go to bed i would look in. We went to the doggy day fair , meat raffles and had chinese, and with the day being so hot this arv, tired us out. have a good week. Love Lyz. XX

doorman

16 years 10 months ago

ziggy

Liked this one. Good stuff, zig. Espen.

seabhac

16 years 3 months ago

Came to this of late

I really like this , an early write for you and I am sure you would weave the words in different pattern now but none the less a lovely feel to it...I am partial to them myself and have several 'special ' local ones. Seabhac

ziggy

16 years 3 months ago

hi

hi lol jeepers i had forgot about this one this was one wrote to long ago to mention but i got this read out on 2fm when they were talking about fairy forts , which i when i text this in at work , got a good giggle hearing tom dunne reading it cheers again ,,,,,,,,,zigs

doorman

16 years 3 months ago

A nice reminder

Long time since I read this one, and it's still a gem. Keep this one close. Espen.

ziggy

16 years 3 months ago

hey

cheers espen , i don`t get many reads on old writes ......zigs ,thanks for the return

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Ziggy

im late but better late than never ... cant believe i missed this one way back then ... lovely write and as Espen says, a gem Love JayCee x x

ziggy

16 years 3 months ago

hi jayne

cheers your always welcome to my words ,,,,zigs

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