Northern Season Changes ( the Southern complement haiku)

Fortress of warm sacked
by frenzied rush of cold air
warmth is then usurped

— infinite_dwarf, Sep 18, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: North Carolina, USA, USA

Favorite Poets: E.A. Poe, Lewis Carroll, Charles Bukowski, Michael McClure, Lawrence Ferlenghetti.

Critiques

yenti

16 years 8 months ago

Winter and Change

I am feeling Usurped and damned cold now, A great write Oh! Distant Little Person. PC:- A person that is very far away that has growth problems. La La You have a lovely day out there, Yours Ian.T

Ink Dragon

16 years 8 months ago

Jess,

how cool that there's even more of your Japanese stuff! The only good thing about my absence is that I can now read several works by all my friends. Yours, ~Nina

Candlewitch

16 years 8 months ago

Jess-Dwarf

Very well done. Now I have to read the other poem mentioned. I have heard from several people that we are in for a very cold Winter, this year... hope that my sources are all wrong! Always, Cat

Quillsvein1

16 years 8 months ago

a sensate

haiku that spills over into the stomach--and indeed, here we are, just on the tip of being frosty! nicely done. GB

Dalton

16 years 1 month ago

haikus usually have a sting in the tale only to say that they are as unconnected as dream cycles. utterances overheard by a stranger in a dream. this is hard to accomplish. keep writing love and well wishes john x