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greeneyes
greeneyes
Sep 18, 2009 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

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Clouds drift past the moon
Its bright glow  begins the pain
Awakens the beast
— greeneyes, Sep 18, 2009

About the Author

Country/Region: Colorado Springs Colorado

Favorite Poets: I love Dr. Suess! He is my favorite, I would love to write for children.

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Geezer

Geezer

16 years 10 months ago

Bestial...

I have the same thoughts every full-moon. Driving taxi, I get to see the behavior of many poeple during a full-moon. I tend to agree, that it certainly brings out the animal side of some. Nice Japanese! I don't know much about this form, but like what you wrote. Great job, ~ Geezer
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lyz

16 years 10 months ago

Dear Greeneyes.

Eloquent words u write. Even though this is a bit scary. These words could be used in the beginning of a werewolf movie, spoken sultry like, then, bang, music, moon and the cloud. Arrgh. Lol. You are very witty, short writes which have a big impact. Well done, I like. Love Lyz. XX
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 10 months ago

Elizabeth

Even though the full moon brings out the craziness, I still love a big beautiful full moon in the night sky. Your poem gave me chills, excellent work! Loved the imagery. Always, Cat
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mantiscepter

16 years 10 months ago

Moon dance

An awakening within. born in the moons temperance, but sure, consumption, Well done writing. John Mantiscepter
Seren

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

Dear Elizabeth

I am amoured of the moon so this one caught my attention lovely haiku Love and higgest bugs Jayne

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