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Clouds drift past the moon
Its bright glow  begins the pain
Awakens the beast
— greeneyes, Sep 18, 2009

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Country/Region: Colorado Springs Colorado

Favorite Poets: I love Dr. Suess! He is my favorite, I would love to write for children.

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Geezer

Geezer

16 years 8 months ago

Bestial...

I have the same thoughts every full-moon. Driving taxi, I get to see the behavior of many poeple during a full-moon. I tend to agree, that it certainly brings out the animal side of some. Nice Japanese! I don't know much about this form, but like what you wrote. Great job, ~ Geezer
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lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Greeneyes.

Eloquent words u write. Even though this is a bit scary. These words could be used in the beginning of a werewolf movie, spoken sultry like, then, bang, music, moon and the cloud. Arrgh. Lol. You are very witty, short writes which have a big impact. Well done, I like. Love Lyz. XX
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 8 months ago

Elizabeth

Even though the full moon brings out the craziness, I still love a big beautiful full moon in the night sky. Your poem gave me chills, excellent work! Loved the imagery. Always, Cat
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mantiscepter

16 years 8 months ago

Moon dance

An awakening within. born in the moons temperance, but sure, consumption, Well done writing. John Mantiscepter
Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Elizabeth

I am amoured of the moon so this one caught my attention lovely haiku Love and higgest bugs Jayne