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Fragments
Pouring into night
heat and cool rest
to blend
A smell
abstruing sense,
wearing of day,
sliding into an envelope
sent to shadow-lands,
I submerge to rest
in jasmine,
glimmered to dream
slung in a hammock,
bedazzled in the fire of illusion,
I lay in wonder of the cross
A lone cicada
trilled,
a twilight anthem settling
to a cadence of love,
drifting and distracted
by darken descendants,
phantoms of Grey
with no light's knife,
they twix the mix
of palate,
Ocher hues spread,
merging to black
swallowed,upended,
in the soft line
of the horizons dome,
mixing paradise
with the stars
A spruce air seduces taste,
to find,
this voids seduction
is to breath in heaven,
teasing to gasp
in this beauty,
and suckling to taste
in the delectable Grey,
becoming a twin to moon,
I am struck,
as half-light bewitches me
and swings my hammock,
to the milky way,
the southern cross
cradles my head,
and jasmine visions
are overcome,
listing in an untouchable bliss
I lay down,
abed of light
embraced by a universe
of my own making,
dream knitting
fibrils of saffron time
Critiques
lyz
16 years 8 months ago
Dearest Seren
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Lyz
Orphani
16 years 8 months ago
you are getting better, and
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Barry
Electric Blue
16 years 8 months ago
Fragments
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dearest Magz
Geezer
16 years 8 months ago
To dazzle mine eyes...
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Sir Gee
Bonitaj
16 years 8 months ago
Fragments!
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Boni
hugo la rosa
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Seren
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dearest Hugo
Orphani
16 years 8 months ago
congratulations on the
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Barry
Steele Massey
16 years 8 months ago
Wow
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Steele
ziggy
16 years 8 months ago
fragments
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Patrick
Kailashana
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Jayne, you have become
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dearest Anna
Kailashana
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Lady Jayne, you have
Candlewitch
16 years 8 months ago
Dearest one
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dearest Cat
odd molly
16 years 8 months ago
Dearest Jayne.This is the
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dearest Molly
Ink Dragon
16 years 8 months ago
Jayne,
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Nina
Unknownquantity
16 years 8 months ago
Loved it Mum its awesome but
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Elloooo naughty one , I
doorman
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Jayne
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Espen
doorman
16 years 8 months ago
Four legged fragment
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
LOL ok I too am a curious creature
xena465
15 years 11 months ago
Brilliant JayCee
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Xena
xena465
15 years 11 months ago
Hey JayCee
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Ive seriously made some not