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Sep 16, 2009
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Blood Lust
Hazy mist thinning
As total darkness
Eclipses a bright, harvest moon
Total silence
Except for the rapid thumping
Of two undead hearts
Icy fingers, grasp her shoulders
Spinning her around
Facing one another
Fangs locked with intense desire
Eyes melt through the passion
Like fire to ice
As they fall to the ground
Rolling, tumbling, scrambling
Clothes tearing, claws to back
Flesh dug deep beneath the nails
A purr, a growl
A moan and scream
As they feed off each other's racy dreams
Blood pours onto the green grass
Splattering love's deepest emotion
Like paint in an artist's masterpiece creation
Deeper and deeper
They plunge
Giving in to love's greatest pleasure
Harder and harder
He flips her over
Hips grinding into each other
Slowly eclipse disipates
As the moonlight seeps in
Casting an orange glow
Against glistening skin
As quickly as they came
They disappeared
Two tantric shadows in the night
All is fair in blood lust and love
Until next time .......
As total darkness
Eclipses a bright, harvest moon
Total silence
Except for the rapid thumping
Of two undead hearts
Icy fingers, grasp her shoulders
Spinning her around
Facing one another
Fangs locked with intense desire
Eyes melt through the passion
Like fire to ice
As they fall to the ground
Rolling, tumbling, scrambling
Clothes tearing, claws to back
Flesh dug deep beneath the nails
A purr, a growl
A moan and scream
As they feed off each other's racy dreams
Blood pours onto the green grass
Splattering love's deepest emotion
Like paint in an artist's masterpiece creation
Deeper and deeper
They plunge
Giving in to love's greatest pleasure
Harder and harder
He flips her over
Hips grinding into each other
Slowly eclipse disipates
As the moonlight seeps in
Casting an orange glow
Against glistening skin
As quickly as they came
They disappeared
Two tantric shadows in the night
All is fair in blood lust and love
Until next time .......
— hardcorechick28, Sep 16, 2009
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lyz
16 years 8 months ago
Hi
hardcorechick28
16 years 8 months ago
glad you loved it
Candlewitch
16 years 8 months ago
yes, very HOT
hardcorechick28
16 years 8 months ago
thank you
Geezer
16 years 8 months ago
I have to say...
hardcorechick28
16 years 8 months ago
thank you
Geezer
16 years 8 months ago
Cold showers...
hardcorechick28
16 years 8 months ago
thank you
KINGZOMBIE
16 years 8 months ago
gothic erotic
hardcorechick28
16 years 7 months ago
i agree
Pumpkin123s
16 years 4 months ago
Wow