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Blood Lust

Hazy mist thinning
As total darkness
Eclipses a bright, harvest moon

Total silence
Except for the rapid thumping
Of two undead hearts

Icy fingers, grasp her shoulders
Spinning her around
Facing one another
Fangs locked with intense desire

Eyes melt through the passion
Like fire to ice
As they fall to the ground
Rolling, tumbling, scrambling
Clothes tearing, claws to back
Flesh dug deep beneath the nails

A purr, a growl
A moan and scream
As they feed off each other's racy dreams
Blood pours onto the green grass
Splattering love's deepest emotion
Like paint in an artist's masterpiece creation

Deeper and deeper
They plunge
Giving in to love's greatest pleasure
Harder and harder
He flips her over
Hips grinding into each other

Slowly eclipse disipates
As the moonlight seeps in
Casting an orange glow
Against glistening skin

As quickly as they came
They disappeared
Two tantric shadows in the night

All is fair in blood lust and love
Until next time .......

— hardcorechick28, Sep 16, 2009

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lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Hi

Have to say, hot. Really enjoyed this vivid erotic piece. I am glad it was not my neck in this one though. Lol. Loved it. Love Lyz. XX
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hardcorechick28

16 years 8 months ago

glad you loved it

This was my first real attempt at something erotic....part of my Deacon and DeMona saga....something I am forever working on. Thanks again....
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 8 months ago

yes, very HOT

A good story just keeps getting better. One thing, could you exchange either the "total" for another word such as: complete? This would give it a sense of smoothness. Always, Cat
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hardcorechick28

16 years 8 months ago

thank you

my first attempt at an erotic poem....i will definitely change that word tonight when i am home and have a little more time. i love the pic of your cat...he/she is beautiful...thanks again....
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 8 months ago

I have to say...

This is the first time I have ever witnessed an unholy union such as this, but I want more! Made my old heart do some thumping of it's own! Great job for your first effort. ~Gee
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hardcorechick28

16 years 8 months ago

thank you

thank you....glad it made someone's heart thump!!!! I wasnt sure what was appropriate on here so I didnt get into as much detail as I had liked...next time, I will try giving it a little more heat...you may need a cold shower after...LOL...glad you liked it....
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 8 months ago

Cold showers...

Cold showers are sacrilege! But I know what you meant. Just be sure you warn everyone! I think it is a good idea, and one I'm seeing more of. Great work and keep 'em comin'. ~ Gee
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hardcorechick28

16 years 8 months ago

thank you

Am glad you are looking forward to more. There are many sides of me no one has met yet. This is the one place I can bring them out....more to come....
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Pumpkin123s

16 years 4 months ago

Wow

I really love your work. Every time i read it i can see the whole picture in my mind. It's Deadly Beautiful!