Angel Of Spirit

   In this heart
   of mine I sing
     a song
   to an angel
   angelic" with wings

   sweeping as gold
she flies through dreams
in the beauty of sunsets
  it always has seemed
   with gentleness
   and quality
surrounded with grace
   so tenderly
   her loveliness
   a vibrant glow
  as shimmers of light
   her passing shows

   in a vision for each
  this beauty we behold
placing hearts in reach
   as minds unfold
  in blossoms so pure
of desires most wanted
  a freshness to souls
   long since haunted

— mantiscepter, Sep 16, 2009

About This Poem

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Country/Region: USA

Critiques

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dearest John

Of all your poems, and I think I have read all you have here, this is my new favourite ... its just wonderful what can I say ... I cannot pick just one line or stanza they are all outstanding and beautiful bravo !!!! love and higgest bugs Jayne x x

mantiscepter

16 years 8 months ago

Angels

Hi Jayne how are the stars over your skies tonight. nice to hear from you. I've been back and forth tonight all over the site. and found out I was on , spot light for awhile, thats cool. my MInds lost it's grasp today, I read on a comment I had been nominated, or I would have never known. cool. so I'm grateful for your comments on this writing. Thanks for the read. Higg Buggs John Mantiscepter

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dear John, you where in

Dear John, you where in spotlight not just nominated soooo stand tall and proud it was a wonderful poem and I voted for you lol big hugs Jayne x x

mantiscepter

16 years 8 months ago

Angels

I sure miss a lot, so it's good your here to keep me in touch. I thank you; and everyone else that were responsible for this honor, there is" a great feeling of pride involved. thanks again. Mantiscepter

lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Oh Yes

These last two writes of yours has just been outstanding. I love this. I am over picking faves. You have found your forte. I love it, keep this up, these beautiful writes. Love Lyz XX

mantiscepter

16 years 8 months ago

OF LIFE

Lyz. your a constant on this site I love to hear from you, how have you been,? hopefully life finds you well. I have had a slow week, but a good one, all is well in these western skies, up here, in the big town of Everett. I am humbled by your support and attention, there are so many good writers on this site I feel lucky to be able to write along side you all. Much Love John Mantiscepter