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Sep 16, 2009
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I'm Amazed, from "A to J"
I'm amazed, that I will never know the heartache of disillusionment
like when someone knows the other's been dishonest,
and I can't explain the feelings that I know, right now
makes me wonder if I'm being put to the "test".
For in our short three years, and counting
you've never been unreasonable, or lie...
cosequently, I have great faith in you to be honest
because you'd never steer me wrong, or make me cry.
How is it, that I even deserve your perfect temperment ?
Whatever task I performed, I've been greatly overpaid,
I couldn't have asked for more blessings, in a life-time
to be without you, makes me most afraid.
You complete the very part of me that's attractive, to you
and when I'm with you, all "drama" fades away,
with your spirit, I can handle any circumstances
and in my heart of hearts, you're with me all the way.
Soon, before we stroll together through eternity
we share our footprints on this earth, to make us strong...
I'm so proud to take my place, right beside you
for 'tis you alone, who has taught me "love's sweet song".
like when someone knows the other's been dishonest,
and I can't explain the feelings that I know, right now
makes me wonder if I'm being put to the "test".
For in our short three years, and counting
you've never been unreasonable, or lie...
cosequently, I have great faith in you to be honest
because you'd never steer me wrong, or make me cry.
How is it, that I even deserve your perfect temperment ?
Whatever task I performed, I've been greatly overpaid,
I couldn't have asked for more blessings, in a life-time
to be without you, makes me most afraid.
You complete the very part of me that's attractive, to you
and when I'm with you, all "drama" fades away,
with your spirit, I can handle any circumstances
and in my heart of hearts, you're with me all the way.
Soon, before we stroll together through eternity
we share our footprints on this earth, to make us strong...
I'm so proud to take my place, right beside you
for 'tis you alone, who has taught me "love's sweet song".
— docmaverick, Sep 16, 2009
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Critiques
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
A beautiful heartfelt poem
docmaverick
16 years 8 months ago
But Jayne....
mantiscepter
16 years 8 months ago
NEVER
docmaverick
16 years 8 months ago
Whenever you comment....
lyz
16 years 8 months ago
Glad to see u back
docmaverick
16 years 8 months ago
I wish it were I....
Antoinette Mar…
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Doc....
docmaverick
16 years 8 months ago
Thank you, Antoinette....
press
16 years 8 months ago
Doc
docmaverick
16 years 8 months ago
You have that way....