Seren

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The Devils Delight (Adult content)

As a breath
of butterflies wings,
your touch
lights my soul to fire,
Aching,
for a quivered delight,
just a reach away
,
The heady brush
of tongue and skin,
draws to cold sliver's
of shivered moans,
Heating to boil
over passions end,
and into ecstasy's hold

Envelop me in ruby layers
of gossamer heat,
tattooing your name
bone deep,
branding my soul,
to an eternal embrace
of melded spirits

Spooned heat
finding unity,
the burning tracks
of lust
blaze my spirit,
lighting all heavens,
touching the profound,
in gentle whispers
of gasping screams

And in graced pieces
I return to earths fold,
enlightened
being of love,
in a devils hold

— Seren, Sep 16, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page, W.H.Auden, to many and various to include them all ...

Critiques

yenti

16 years 8 months ago

Young Jayne

You are badness, as the feelings are transported in your words, my memory is all of a tizwaz LOL, Lovely write Yours Ian.T

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Ian

LOL I am badness ... I got a giggle out of that :P ... But its been all depressing writes and stuff for me and every now and then I like to write a naughty one ... thanks for the read and comment LOL I hope yout tizwaz is all sorted now .. not sure what that is but lol ... love and higgest bugs Jayne x x x

Candlewitch

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Jayne

***** Ohhhhh Jaynie! This is dazzlingly impressive. Makes me feel a bit naughty. My favorite lines are: The heady brush of tongue and skin, draws to cold sliver’s of shivered moans, Heating to boil over passions end, and into ecstasy’s hold Have you been feeling frisky lately? LOL! Always, Cat

docmaverick

16 years 8 months ago

I must admit....

...I can't remember the last time I felt so "naughty" in front of my computer screen ! GREAT imagery, Jayne.....you little she-devil ! Well done, poet.....and good for you ! "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Doc

you know whats funny ... I said to someone this morning that this one was tame lol ... and I didnt think it was good but if everyone feels naughty I might have to rethink that :P glad you liked it doc I am always happy when you like em lol (hug) love and higgest bugs Jayne x x

docmaverick

16 years 8 months ago

OH ! Baby, Jayne....

...I likes it.....a lot. You already know that you've a way with words, so don't let anyone tell you otherwise. As far as turning that "way" into a poem, well.....that's where you "shine". I'm so happy that I'm allowed to read your "works". "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick. ps) IF this one was "tame", then why aren't the comments ?

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Doc, I am sorry I am

Dear Doc, I am sorry I am late in replying to you been a little under the weather the last few days and not even neopoet could get me out of bed lol ... thank you for the support and the comment I had a good giggle at that and your right I never know if they are any good lol and thankies for the laugh ;) I needed it , much love and higgest bugs Jayne x x x

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dearest Cat

I had heard from a good source that endorphins are good for the body and healing lol lets me know I am still alive lmfao ... and here I didnt think this write was that naughty to be honest :| shows how much I know ... thanks as always for the read and the comment darlin hope your feeling okies ,(hug) love and higgest bugs Jayne x x

Orphani

16 years 8 months ago

you build up to the

you build up to the creshendo very nicely, very controled, making every word extend its weight to form a unified entirety.passion with out control misses the opportunity of the unexpected moment ,but you complete the chorus as softly and warmly as you begin-- a violin that caresses the bow of music. .....o

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dear O

I had to come back to this one a few times sometimes when I am writing it feels rushed and forced so i let the words come to me when they are ready ... I am so glad you got the build , with a wonderful compliment thank you ... love and higgest bugs Jayne x x x

lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Seren

You dirty girl, what have you been up to while I was asleep? whatever it was, I want some, you greedy girl.Lol. Very hot, a little provocative,sensual, cheeky, and teasy. Very well done. Loved it, hate missing out though,Lol. Counting the days. LOL. You are the devils daughter, stop being too nice, add more. Lol. Truly though, a wonderful bit of juicy writing. Now wheres my toy? Ooohwaa!! Ha! Love Lyz. XX

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dear LYZ !!! PMSL !!

sorry that comment just cracked me up sooooo bad , ok its like this I look at it like this ? I am sick not dead and they say? one you miss out on you never get back , soooo lmao I dont like saying NO !! hahahahaha what was I up to last night .... NO COMMENT ? :P hahahahaha love ya hun glad you liked my little 'effort' ... I am still laughing @ the devils daughter ... Snake said its all good hes the devils right hand man so we can be devilsh together dirty bastard !!! hes sitting right here ... love and higgest bugs Jayne x x x x Hope your not melting like us, its 35degrees here, heats getting in early this year lol love love

greeneyes

16 years 8 months ago

wow

I love it when you talk dirty! Great poem Jayne. Love, Elizabeth

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Elizabeth

hubby says the same thing LMAO ... but you know I'm always happy when you like them , thanks for the giggle :P love and higgest bugs Jayne x x

seabhac

16 years 8 months ago

A bit of light lovelyness

On a dark day this has been a bit of light lovelyness, pure fun and delight. Just loved the lines As a breath of butterflies wings, your touch lights my soul to fire, they just pulled me in Thanks Jayne

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Lyz

I dont know what you meen about dark days but (hugs) I am glad you found some peace in this write my friend,when I write them thats why I write them to lifet myself out of my doldrums or black dog days ... love to you and yours huni , hope when you wake up things are little brighter ... much love and higgest bugs Jayne x x x