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Sophia
When I first stared down at that stick turn pink
How could this be, was all I could think
A fifth child? How will i cope?
Will things be okay? Do I have a hope?
I thought I was done with diapers and things,
Bottles, rattles, and teething rings.
For three months I threw up, I wanted to die.
All I did was sleep, vomit and cry.
But as time went by, and my stomach started to grow,
My green complexion left, and I started to glow.
I told myself " what can I say" A baby is a blessing,
Things will be okay..
Then when I began to feel your feet kick my side,
I was in love with you instantly , prepared for the ride.
From the moment they laid you down on my chest
i knew of all my love affairs, this was the best
When you looked up at me, as the doc cut the cord,
Tears fell down my face, and i thanked the Lord.
You were the most beautiful creature I ever did see
And i was grateful to God, you were given to me
I would love you always, i vowed to you then
A fantastic journey was about to begin
Seven years has past, since that magical night.
Your smile is dazzling, your eyes shine bright.
You are my fairy princess! My little queen.
You will grow to be the most beautiful woman,
the world's ever seen.
One thing i know well, One thing that is true
My life wouldn't be complete, if i did;t have you.
Critiques
lyz
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Greeneyes.
greeneyes
16 years 8 months ago
Lyz
mantiscepter
16 years 8 months ago
wonderment
greeneyes
16 years 8 months ago
thankyou
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Elizabeth
greeneyes
16 years 8 months ago
Jayne
odd molly
16 years 8 months ago
I so love your poem it is
yenti
16 years 8 months ago
Sophia
greeneyes
16 years 8 months ago
thankyou