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The Girl in the Red Coat

The coat was long (to the ankles) and red        
like the flame that burns bright in a young heart,
or a sun rising on the longest day
of the year.  Where are you going my girl,
so full of yourself, no room left for fear?

You fly the coop to follow heart-shaped dreams
in the year of maxi-coats and Marlboros,
black convertibles and tall lace-up boots.
Pies in the skies high, you chase frozen sun
on silver wings till there is no darkness—

for a time.   But the coat, like fading light,
you toss to the floor of night; and the days
get shorter (so do the coats, I might add).
The sun barely gets up in the morning
and the sounds of disco drums pale away.

Sunset lies down to rest for the longest
night of the year, sprinkling pearl pink ashes
across its glacial path.  The girl, empty
of herself, flies on wings of angels.  She
wears a robe, long (to the ankles) and white.
— deelilah, Sep 15, 2009

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Region, Country: Northwest USA, USA

Favorite Poets: E.E. Cummings, Robert W. Service, Emily Dickenson

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lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Hi

I thought this was beautiful. I must admit the red coat got me. I love red coats but they do not love me. This may have a little sadness attached, but the wording made it a pleasure to read. Love Lyz. XX
deelilah

deelilah

16 years 8 months ago

Hi Lyz

What a neat way to spell your name. Thank you for the nice comment and the nice stars. The red coat was a symbol (though real) for the prospect of a long and exiting life. Yes, there is a little sadness to look back (so far) to days long ago. A person could get a new red coat, but probably not a feeling like the one associated with this red coat from the past. Please stop by again. Yours, Deelilah