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Those Without Love(Have No Fears of Death)

With his eyes to the heavens
he exclaimed "Oh my God!"
before he jerked through the trap
and into eternity.
Inadvertently his feet begin flinching
the prominent dance of death
a formidable resident at every lynching
The heart wrenching sorrow
of a now fatherless child
are drowned out by the cheers and chants
of the frenzied crowd gone wild.
A widowed wife holds back her grief
as she sees the thief she fell in love with
abruptly swinging from his neck
his head covered by a smooth black sheath
they cut the man down and his lifeless body
quickly slumps to the ground
before he is even dragged away
the next noose is tightly wound
A man is brought in draped in heavy shackles
Edging before the rope, the man has no family
no drive nor hope, no religion, no ambition,
no specialty nor fears.
"For crimes against his majesty the king,
You are hereby to be hanged by the neck until dead
any last words?"
"yeah.. how about ....... fuck yourself you gutless worms!!!"
— Bosscombat, Sep 15, 2009

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themoonman

themoonman

16 years 8 months ago

Boss...

Well I for one enjoyed your drunk write... can see myself saying that to my executioner... bottoms up, or down lol Richard
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Bosscombat

16 years 8 months ago

:)

lol its quite a dodgy poem i know but i thought it was a mighty effort for how drunk i was lol i thought about the last words being "BOMBS AWAY!" glad you enjoyed it ♣
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 8 months ago

Famous last words… I kinda

Famous last words... I kinda like Beethoven's (at least attributed to him by someone): "Friends applaud, the comedy is finished." I've always wondered if the executioner had a favourite love song. Thank you for the inspiration, darlin'. ~A p.s. Drunk? Hmmm.. I wrote a drunken love poem yesterday.
Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Matty

I loved it and I can see you with your finger up at the executioner saying 'fuck you' lmao loved it hun and I think drunken master might become your new nickname ;) love and higgest bugs Jay-knee 2bums x x x x
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lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Boss

I think this was a great write. It actually made me hold my breath for a mo. Anything about throats, necks always get to me.The choking kind of stuff anyway. I may have been strangled in a past life. Any poem that can make u feel and see such vivid images, is a winner for me. On a lighter side, u should get drunk more often Love Lyz. XX
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 8 months ago

Dang Me.....

Hang me and get over with you f...in' blowhards! I've often said that you should use your last breath to blow in 'Deaths' face, a fffffffuuuuccccckkkkkkk yooooooooouuuuuuu! I been that drunk too. You sure know how to show your contempt for whoever and whatever pissed you off! Awesome shit! Gee