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Sep 14, 2009
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I've Touched It's Peaks
Summer sweetened breezes
through Valleys filled with grass
arise to greet each morning
in this mountain sculptured pass
It's jagged rocks that tower free
I seem to know them all
like friends I join them eager
sharing dreams these inner calls
quiet I listen while strolling close
by streams that lightly sing
the birds above on air do float
without movement in their wings
silent" as a fallen wave
till soft, they touch the ground
in search of mates they gather twigs
or just gaily chirp their sounds
this place filled with such beauty
does seem to put to rest
within body tempo yearns
filling full" my inner chest
in quiet" yet warm desires
loving true what I do touch
sensing more than this around me
I feel others " lost with crutch
as this beauty seeks a rendezvous
for their hearts" their minds desires
I could never count the moments
alone as one I stand in eyre
because for me ,these are so special
one's I've seen or touched to seek
these especially private" moments
when my mind has touched it's peaks
through Valleys filled with grass
arise to greet each morning
in this mountain sculptured pass
It's jagged rocks that tower free
I seem to know them all
like friends I join them eager
sharing dreams these inner calls
quiet I listen while strolling close
by streams that lightly sing
the birds above on air do float
without movement in their wings
silent" as a fallen wave
till soft, they touch the ground
in search of mates they gather twigs
or just gaily chirp their sounds
this place filled with such beauty
does seem to put to rest
within body tempo yearns
filling full" my inner chest
in quiet" yet warm desires
loving true what I do touch
sensing more than this around me
I feel others " lost with crutch
as this beauty seeks a rendezvous
for their hearts" their minds desires
I could never count the moments
alone as one I stand in eyre
because for me ,these are so special
one's I've seen or touched to seek
these especially private" moments
when my mind has touched it's peaks
— mantiscepter, Sep 14, 2009
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Critiques
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dearest John, you have
mantiscepter
16 years 8 months ago
Touched
Bert Lamrick
16 years 8 months ago
I feel I've walked
mantiscepter
16 years 8 months ago
Nature Beauty
Bonitaj
16 years 8 months ago
Thank you
mantiscepter
16 years 8 months ago
POSSESSIVE/REGRESSIVE
lyz
16 years 8 months ago
Dear John
mantiscepter
16 years 8 months ago
Nature Beauty