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FEELING DRY

FEELING DRY 

To Labour in stressful jobs
Like swimming against the tide
Where the dreaded confluence
Of Niger and Benue flow,
Not south, to the creeks of delta
But in reverse subliminal current
Ebb north into Sahara desert
Leaving me dry and wordless
And eating away my musing moments
This toll on poetic grace makes me
Once again, long for the glowing days
When prosaic litany gave way
To spontaneous overflow of rhythms
That gave me voice to speak the word.


 


— t. reflexion, Sep 14, 2009

About This Poem

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Country/Region: NGA

Favorite Poets: Inspired by an article in an old manuscript , It reads:, AXIOMS OF PERFECTION, In the physical order – In the realization of the dream of beauty, In the moral order – In the realization of the dream of love, In the intellectual order – In the realization of dream of poetry, In the spiritual order – In the realization of the dream of the mystics

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Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

This write is touching on

This write is touching on the profound ... poignant write and beautifully put I lvoed every bit of it ...'longing for the days of wine and honey' ... thats what this poem reminded me of and I dont even know where i know that from lol ... wonderful write kind regards Jayne
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

16 years 8 months ago

Hi Jayne

'Out of something hard and bitter, came sweet' and so are your comments to this write 'Feeling Dry' which came when I had nothing to write about and couldn't write for a while. Thank you for your encouraging words even though I still feel the need to tinker and reshape the structure. Best wishes. T.