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docmaverick
docmaverick
Sep 14, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

The Tides of Passion

Time's stallions ride
over eternity's tide
leaving splashes of moments that fade,

the clouds up above
pay their tribute to love
one that's pure, and I'd never trade.

Our love charges through Time
exquisitely sublime
the tides of passion carressing the sea,

Eternity's ride
has brought me my bride
and the equinox sets us both free.

Stormfronts start to wane
but, the elements remain
as the waves of Time crash on the earth,

our "love steeds" leave a wake
and for both of our sakes
the tides of passion rewards us with new birth.
— docmaverick, Sep 14, 2009

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Doc

Wow I pictured two black horses running though the wash lol this write was that vivid for me ... this is brilliant ... no pretty words its fucking awesome I love it ... love and higgest bugs Jayne x x P.S cannot find fault the title is perfect the language use was excellent and the theme was beautiful ...
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 8 months ago

To me, Jayne....

...saying that it was, "fucking awsome", ARE pretty words !lol Seriously, I really DO appreciate the kind words, AND the sentiment behind them, too. You're pretty awsome, yourself ! Thanks, again. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.
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Antoinette Mar…

16 years 8 months ago

My Dearest Doc....

The drama and excitement of this write....holds me hostage...I have read and re-read..this beautiful piece...it moves me beyond measure...thank you once again....your Antoinette Mari
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docmaverick

16 years 8 months ago

To my hostage held by words....

...I thank you once again for ALWAYS reading my work, and for continuously treating said work so kindly. You have always made my day with one of your comments, and I thank you. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.