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Inverted into the Skies
A Thirty storey sky scraper
The birds fly past, fast in a jagged taper
We’re feeling appealingly daring
And stop aloft, twenty stories up.
I remember suspending from a window
Witnessing our accidental summit in the sky.
We were lying on our backs, me and her,
Heads and chests set, gravity denied.
An effortless turn of the head
Fashioned offerings of vertigo.
There’s so much we can learn up here
So much we want to know.
We visualize the sky
Masquerading as the ocean.
The clouds gently glide across it,
In smoothly soothing slow motion
We were beyond everything.
As we looked to the bustling road beneath,
Leaning our heads backwards,
Hands tightly gripping our release
Taking no notice of the sensation of falling,
Trusting, knowing we are safe,
Our imaginations flow, soaring.
Drifting below us, shifting
Was the bottomless rift
Bliss being introspective
Ambushing our eyes
In a deception of perspective
Critiques
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dearest Matty, straight up
Bosscombat
16 years 8 months ago
:)
Kailashana
16 years 8 months ago
To scale oneself is indeed
Bosscombat
16 years 8 months ago
:)
Orphani
16 years 8 months ago
the ever preasant child in
Bosscombat
16 years 8 months ago
:)
lyz
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Boss
Bosscombat
16 years 8 months ago
:)