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Sirup and Soup
Inspire desire perspire
we Neopoet's we're on fire
creating things that bang
and bump
in the nights
of fancied imaginings
awaking demons and butterflies
to fly and flap and fling their words
on wings and spikes
and garden forks
sent on the winds in thunder
plundered crime
coloured varnished tarnished loot
in the boots of our cars
that trudge and smudge the highroad
the low road
the by-roads
the sky roads
in vapoured steam
heat waves
here's and have been's
novices
and cats-cradles
and mamma's
and lasered black bats
birds
and octopuses, or is it octopi
pussy cats
flies
no word is limit for our eyes
what a demise
as the cries of the elders
the trees like the oak
give us a soak
of their tears
'cos their fears
are expounded flaunted and floundered
like wet fish in sirup and soup
farts bash and poop
oops I stumbled and mumbled
how vulgar the bulge on her belly
is not just red jelly
its you
its me
in the birth of our being
all screaming and beaming
and saying a name of no sense
its nonsense
incense
in sermons of life
we learn to be nice,
no naeice
and think twice
no a thousand times thrice...
where was I now,
oh yes cleaning my teeth
in this world
like a map on a cow.
Critiques
Geezer
16 years 9 months ago
Syrup and soup...
seabhac
16 years 9 months ago
Ah so refreshing
lyz
16 years 9 months ago
Dear Ann H
DawningDaytripper
16 years 8 months ago
I love the abandon of your
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Bravo Ann this is wonderful