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Sep 12, 2009
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When The Moon Hangs Blue
When The Moon Hangs Blue
When the moon hung
blue in the sky,
I attached all my hopes
to your whispered promises;
softly articulated lies
like rose petals hiding
cruel thorns of veracity.
Blind to the truth,
I heard and saw no more than
what I needed at the time.
You made it so easy
with your inviting smiles
of warm desire fashioned
for only me, the object
of all your pent up passion.
You bade me welcome
to wade into your
warm waters of seduction.
Gladly, I followed where you led,
willingly, I turned
my heart over to your care.
Never had I known, before,
that raw truth can be ugly,
stark in its unfolding.
Not until I found you
in bed with another she,
as besotted with you
as only one in love can be.
So I leave her to you;
I will not beg, rage
or make ultimatums,
but silently take the
broken pieces of my heart
and, in time, patch them
back into a functioning
organ, once again,
when the moon hangs blue
in a late September sky...
— Candlewitch, Sep 12, 2009
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hugo la rosa
16 years 9 months ago
Dear Cat
Candlewitch
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Hugo
Seren
16 years 9 months ago
Dear Cat
Candlewitch
16 years 8 months ago
Dear one
ziggy
16 years 9 months ago
when the moon hangs blue
Candlewitch
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Ziggy
lyz
16 years 9 months ago
Dear Cat
Candlewitch
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Lyz
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Cat
Candlewitch
16 years 8 months ago
How Beautiful!
poewriter58
16 years 8 months ago
Cat
Candlewitch
16 years 8 months ago
Thanks Chrys
infinite_dwarf
16 years 8 months ago
Oh wow
Candlewitch
16 years 8 months ago
Hi Jess-Dwarf
greeneyes
16 years 8 months ago
Cat
Candlewitch
16 years 8 months ago
Elizabeth
mantiscepter
16 years 8 months ago
Blue Heart
Candlewitch
16 years 8 months ago
hello John
Bonitaj
16 years 8 months ago
AH CAT!
Candlewitch
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Boni
Cloudthings
16 years 8 months ago
you wove me into that picture like I could feel the pounding hea
Candlewitch
16 years 8 months ago
hello Anni
DloganB
16 years 8 months ago
Bravo
DloganB
16 years 8 months ago
Bravo
Candlewitch
16 years 8 months ago
Hello Again!
Pamela A. Lamppa
16 years 8 months ago
Sometimes life delivers - more
Ink Dragon
16 years 7 months ago
Cat,