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mantiscepter
Sep 12, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Granger Of Souls

 He came at 'twane
dark the stranger

moon a crest 
a demon granger

He hides his nest
in terror's dream

lost in shadows
beyond he preens

his darkness hidden
where death betrays

unknowing spirits
are evils prey

eye's are cast
to windows sill

windows  latched
I feel a chill

was I touched
mind plays games

oh  damn shit>
pain pain pain

 Soul is draining 
sheets turn red

past my  fears
here I'll shed

 once held tears
I'm on my way

to Satan's layer 
here I'll stay































— mantiscepter, Sep 12, 2009

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Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dear John

OoOoOooOo a dark write from you ;) I think its great I can feel a chill in the air lol ;) cannot pick any one line its all scary/eerie and very good ... Love and higgest bugs Jayne x x x
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mantiscepter

16 years 9 months ago

Halloween!!

Thanks Jayne, I thought everyone would be writing a scary one, so I dusted off my old clown, and put him to work on the site... I don't know why, but it's done, and I'm glad you liked it. and thanks again. Mantiscepter ps Higgest Bugs to you also. hahahahahahaha!
themoonman

themoonman

16 years 9 months ago

Mantiscepter...

Yes, there is something scary in the air... enjoyed your walk in the dark. layer... did you mean lair? like a spider's lair? Richard
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mantiscepter

16 years 9 months ago

layers

Hi Richard, how the heck are ya.? it is the time of year. creepy spooky, slimy. any way was my first attempt, at an odd script. so layer. I wrote it as an erie way to say, that I would now be taken to his under ground, place and to be.[propagated] buried like a root for him to nurture, hence. [ layer] in demise. if that makes sense. either way would work for me. thanks for stopping in to visit. have a good one glad you liked it. Mantiscepter
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lyz

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Mantiscepter

I just finished chuckling to myself, because as I was trying to read your poem my eyes kept averting back to your pic. I hate it. Lol. Great movie but bloody scary. I actually kept losing lines, so I put my hand over it. Ha. Great poem by the way, I enjoyed it and I kept thinking, IT WAS THE CLOWN Lol. Great story. Love Lyz XX The pic is appropriate.
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mantiscepter

16 years 9 months ago

Clowns

Hey Lyz,whats new? The clown is off the hook, He even scares me!!! and I do the same thing I'll be busy writing, and I'll think it moved , He is freaky. happy to here you enjoyed it. maybe He should wear a mask or some thing. have a good one. and thanx. Mantiscepter