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Anunnaki

 it's because someone once called me "darling"
and the tip of the word slides down my breast
like a rogue tongue,
i am condemned to remember
how sweet the aftertaste--
what can never be forgiven
for i know the fruit
and it is good

it's because the light hits my window just so
in the early morning
and now
the Dahlias bloom, head as
large as any man's

i am a fissure of earth,
nothing escapes my light


~
— Kailashana, Sep 11, 2009

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 9 months ago

Ah, Kaligantsaros… we

Ah, Kaligantsaros... we understand one another. Say I am you. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QqVBGv2hpQ4&feature=related ~A
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mantiscepter

16 years 9 months ago

Rolling and savoring

there was still a glow in your words, about this subject, that brought a light of it own, it was stellar poem, not raped, like a thousand thoughts before it. pure and clean thoughts felt deep inside. an open sea of memory. painted with a warming touch of Love very nice. Mantiscepter
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lyz

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Kailashana

A very rich read. A little sad or longing. I read it slowly, I loved the last 2 lines. They just made me feel nice, I enjoyed this. Love Lyz. XX
Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dearest Anna

The fruit of our living is in our loving, that first darlin that rings the bells and makes the heart sing, maybe not heard anymore but Darlin' ;) you are loved more than you know,your words spark in sadness but you shall find what it is you seek, Kahlil says the deeper the sorrow the deeper for capacity for joy and love,when love finds you?,they will be loved unlike no other ... love and higgest bugs Jayne x x x