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Sep 11, 2009
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A handsome hand has passed over the eyes tears have ceased - frowns been denied. Firm fingers have stretched across the mouth, tieing the tongue - not to cry out! A breeze has past unnoticed by the 'free', garnering winds of change - a forced reminder "just be"! A stilted silence has settledover the land,surmised by intentionsthey don't understand - embedded in time,by Fate's inveigled hand.
BjR 11 September, '09
BjR 11 September, '09
— Bonitaj, Sep 11, 2009
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Bonitaj
16 years 10 months ago
Thank you Theo!
lyz
16 years 10 months ago
dear Bonitaj
Bonitaj
16 years 10 months ago
why thank you Liz!
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