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Uninhabited dress
The Uninhabited dress
There you hang
and for what
out in the street
you uninhabited dress
who was it that wore you last
or have you never been owned
never been worn
why are you waiting
immobile hanging there
when you should be swinging along
with the hips of a girl
making you dance
the breasts filling you out
the waist held in close
the waltz of life started
performed
so why wait till a customer comes
let me try you on
and take you a walk
to the town
show you off
grace your shapes
with my body
with my thoughts
with my swing of joyful steps
with the dazzle
of your presence
close around me
Uninhibited dress
would you rather she took you
to the town
she has the hips
seductive and bold
she has the allure
the bosoms are full
her eyes are painted
her hair dyed red
her lips have the flare of a colour
that clashes wonderfully
with your shades
she will take you to places
I have never been
never seen
never wish to deem fit for me
no, I don't know
The dress made in Italy
who chose her then
imported to Norway
as a new trend
displayed in the street
like a simple soul
she waits to see what will
make her whole
worn
loved
flaunted
Perhaps it is her
who sits on her throne
of quiet
the little grey girl on the corner
where the mother is ill
and the father long gone
you can dress her
with happy abandon
and verve
if she's got the nerve
to try you
on
she will glide like a queen
through the streets of the town
in her habit
of simple beauty
and all heads will turn round
its the grey girl
who's bought a new gown
so lovely she is
in that dress
who would have guessed
she was
so beautiful
Critiques
Seren
16 years 9 months ago
Darling Ann
Nordic cloud
16 years 9 months ago
Oh wow Jayne!
orgami
16 years 9 months ago
Well Ann
lyz
16 years 9 months ago
Dear Ann H
Geezer
16 years 9 months ago
Beautiful...
Orphani
16 years 8 months ago
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