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Dear O... Simply? just the depth of how very beautiful this little poem is? .. I am in awe wonderful write ... love and respect Jayne

This is good! Short but packed with wow. raskin

This is really good. A clever write. I know my mouth doesn't have an end. Lol. Quite profound. Lyz.XX

Hi, I've come searching, after the goings on under "History", see if I can find what to conundrum was (I say conundrum because how can anyone be 'right' on such matters, it's all just opinion) Anyway, there is no evidence of interaction here to mark the spot, though the write is lovely & definately shows evidence of that kind of "textural"/visual word play, I can see that some would find it distracting, & I admit that even though the delightful sentiment expressed stays so sweetly in my mind (you do have such skill for writing adoring poetry), I do have a kind of klanging imagery of capital letters & dotted lines... I wonder if I'd have noticed it so much had all that discussion not been evident though. Regardless of all that, this is a lovely, lovely poem. Cheers Anni~ "Making the decision to have a child is momentous. It is to decide forever to have your heart go walking around outside your body". ~Elizabeth Stone

A beautiful write... very tender. Always, Cat

Saw this updated in stream had to come back and read ... its only better love Jayne x x

Still a great piece of work and best wishes to you, Love to you and yours, Lyz. XX

Might have missed it otherwise. It feels like a whispered promise, a sweet nothings in my ear. I wanted more... Seabhac

This is a really nice nice piece it read very well i enjoyed it a lot Lee

where have you been - or was it I who was gone? Quite splendid - you keep us hanging on gasping for more~! Bonita j

This is a lovely write Because is misspelled. Other than that I enjoy reading. ~~~~~~~~~ If you don't like it, can't talk about it, then write about it. Respectfully Yours, Barbara

thanks will appreciate you reading and commenting ~~~~~~~~~ If you don't like it, can't talk about it, then write about it. Respectfully Yours, Barbara