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Sep 10, 2009
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the day before ~
the day before you were born
who were you
O wanderer, O pilgrim, O transgressor
of the silence?
who were you September 10th?
before the rubble,
before the dust mixed with the world's tears?
who are you now,
O shared memory?
where were you then?
who were you
O wanderer, O pilgrim, O transgressor
of the silence?
who were you September 10th?
before the rubble,
before the dust mixed with the world's tears?
who are you now,
O shared memory?
where were you then?
— Kailashana, Sep 10, 2009
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Seren
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Dearest Anna
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Where Where Why
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Wonderful
lyz
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Dear Kailashana
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