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Stormy Weather

Lightning fills the sky

And it’s almost like daybreak

For just the split second it’s lit

Blink momentarily

And that’s it, you’ve missed it.

Although its glow is different

The lightning’s glare is white

In contrast to the sun

And its blaring orange light

For every bolt cracking through the atmosphere

As if the sky were made of glass

I smile, standing in the street

Arms outstretched, hoping rains will last.


— Bosscombat, Sep 10, 2009

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Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

WOW… Matty … this ones

WOW... Matty ... this ones beautiful you know how I love a good light show , standing in natures great electrical show , finger up saying come get me bitch lol I can see you brother ;) love and hugz Jayne x x x
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Bosscombat

16 years 9 months ago

:)

i love the rain and lightining too i normally dont like getting wet but that night there was something enticing about standing in the rain glad you liked this one even if it was short <3 ♣
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Orphani

16 years 9 months ago

stormy weather

great expression of faith: hope, confidence, and unconquerable spirit, that searches the sky....o
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Bosscombat

16 years 9 months ago

:)

thanks mate :) happy to see a fresh face ♣
greeneyes

greeneyes

16 years 9 months ago

great

Visually stunning! Wonderful! Love Greeneyes
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Bosscombat

16 years 9 months ago

:)

Thank u kindly Glad u liked it ♣
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lyz

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Boss

Forgive me Father, for I have sinned, I read this mans poem and greatly enjoyed it, for my punishment I must tell this man the Truth. I read, I enjoyed and thought it was great. Lyz XX