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You did it again :O another one and I love it !!! ... alone in the candles another world beckons ;) uh oh you might have started something in my muse lol kind regards love Jayne

Awesome :) I bow to the master ♣ Pea ess. Ill be back to give you stars....I can't do it on my mobile

Aha... now I see & completely understand your reaction. & yes bravo & shazam as well. Just a practical thought, wondering if the lines of dots are more distracting? But yes, I do agree in this instance that you are definitely expressing as visual artist as well as poet & it should always be your call ultimately. I'm certain I don't need to remind you of all the brilliant artists that were shunned and even persecuted for stepping out of the box until after their demise... we humans can be slow to accept things that differ too much in form sometimes.. & it's as simple as what we are accustomed to. I find since I was ill, I am more sensitive to fonts & confusion on screen & paper (& anywhere else, musically or verbally), so I imagine others might be like that, a classic is that I actually find it far harder to detect typos in the font of this draft that we must use to write our messages, I see them far more clearly in the final font after they have been previewed. But you have a point that we should not bend to the calls of every comment I guess, or we would do nothing. Anyway, as always, an admirable write & I have to agree, it somehow looses some of it message in the form for me, however it also has an entirely added dimension which gives it more, so I feel it is worth the effort & the possible compromise. & I LOVE that you have done this, & now understand, as I said, your joy at my own odd word placement recently. I think your effort is far bolder, mine was a far more simple emotional response to a reflection on being thrown around & shaken. Here you have sculpted your emotions & applied the imagery very deliberately, I do admire it greatly. Cheers Anni~ "Making the decision to have a child is momentous. It is to decide forever to have your heart go walking around outside your body". ~Elizabeth Stone

The content too, you have a fascinating mind, does it throw you about, do you do any othr arts? Yours Ann of Norway