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Diatom Shells

Sep 09, 2009 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Palpitations

the goddess of love is immortal--she lives on stolen skipped heartbeats

— Diatom Shells, Sep 09, 2009

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lyz

16 years 10 months ago

Dear Diatom Shells

What a beautiful Goddess, and live on she must. Beautiful write, well done. Lyz XX

16 years 10 months ago

You skipped me here

Succinct. Ann

16 years 10 months ago

Dear Kyrie , another lovely

Dear Kyrie , another lovely write, I loved it ... love and hugz Jayne x x x

WF

Worldwide Freeride

16 years 10 months ago

Then skip away oh goddess of the pen...

In cantered skip you prance upon the page like a frolicing philly in a harvestime pasture... add a little bit of those duracell pink bunnies that go on and on and on... never ending in playful gait playing upon each of our heart strings with such adroit and tender rhythms... A perfect poem of all things good... may you forever remain in love, so your heartbeat goes forever on. Love the happy go lucky feel of this great little ditty! Dale :)

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