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White Sage

Of all the creatures that
have crossed the page,
my favourite of all
is the White Sage

Passing through time
from magic sands,
it was gifted her Story
went through the lands

From trails of snails
and the twitter of birds,
nature alone
passed on the word

Her beauty does shine
and challenge the light,
the twinkle of eye
glows sapphire at night

A gown flowing free
of golden hue,
and the cord at waist
a rainbow of blues

Her voice does soothe
the furies of fate,
her touch will heal
an object of hate

Dreaming stories
to the four winds
telling and teaching
as time did begin

Weaving tales
that float in thin air,
riding a griffin
without any care

Painting the streaks
that tail the stars,
leaving a map
to treasure afar

Shaping a horn
of timeless life,
the unicorn born
did jump tonight

At night if I
sit statue still,
I see a griffin
crest the hill

And watching as magic
dazzles an age,
I sit in awe
of the White Sage

— Seren, Sep 09, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page, W.H.Auden, to many and various to include them all ...

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Bosscombat

16 years 9 months ago

:)

like i said before i want a griffin id hang out with him and call him griffo awesome write, one of my favs <3 ♣
Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Matty, Big Smile I am

Dear Matty, Big Smile I am glad you like this one its a special one to me, been working on it a while lol love and hugz Jayne x x
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Orphani

16 years 9 months ago

white sage

on a winter day- off way way far distant --on a beach ,where no thought graces but yours, as lovers entwine memories, and seek the perfect shell(sowe)are friends. in that solitude of place. your words more fragrant then the sage........o
Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Orphan ...O

After reading your masterpiece this morning, Your words have given me a big smile :) I am honoured and humble but thank you friend ... Love Jayne x x
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 9 months ago

White Sage.....

The heart always knows, the gift of friendship. You write straight from the heart. L & Hugz, Gee.
Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Gee,

I do tend to write from my heart and this one has been playing in my mind for a while and then the other day the rest of the story came to me and I decided it was time to put it down before I forget it lol thanks for the read I am always happy when my friends enjoy them ... much love and hugz Jayne x x x
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lyz

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Seren

My fave, so far. You took me for a ride. The White Sage, how beautiful. Out of the poems I have read of yours, I think you have excelled yourself in this one. Fantasy, I must say Is very much Your forte. Love Lyz XX
Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Lyz

Thank you !! for the wonderful compliment :) I do love writing fantasy , and I have a special love for myths and the mysterious, I dance the mysteries in my mind some nights and yesterday I was sitting looking at this one and the rest of her story came from nowhere I sometimes wonder if someone else doesnt write through me , cause I am damn sure I dont know where the ideas come from , serendipity is a good muse though LOL bitch has had me writing up a storm the last two days LOL ... love to you and Jadey hope all is well down there , will ring you on the weekend take care darlin love Jayne x x x
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mantiscepter

16 years 9 months ago

Glows in Sapphire Nights

Fantastic, loved it all. lovely words in a very nice flow of pictures, like flowers waiting to unfold into this beautiful writing flowing all over my screen, just wonderful. Mantiscepter
Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

I am just smiling LOL thats

I am just smiling LOL thats just a beautiful compliment to pay someone , I thank you John, I will be out and about reading again tonight will see what you have been creating for us :) love and hugz Jayne x x x
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 9 months ago

White Sage

Seren I love your beautiful story of rhymn transendental you lift my spirit my dear friend full of beautiful colours amazing flow of words like honey so smooth Electric Blue
Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dearest Magz

Tbis one is special, hubby and one of the other poets here inspired this one the poet doesn't know lol and I have a plan for this one :) love you huni higgest bugs Jayne x x
yenti

yenti

16 years 9 months ago

Hi Young Jayne

It is little ole Picky Picky me brandishing my keyboard as a sword to cut through one of your Stanzas, I spied a tratorous line or two in one of them, so had to ask you to Smite it with your loving words dear Lady:- Passing through time from magic sands, it was gifted her Story was told through the lands It's the joining, twix the third line and the fourth line, Shall I carry on being silly La La, Otherwise once again a lovely write, Yours, Little One, Ian.T
Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Ian you can be as silly as

Ian you can be as silly as you want on my page LOL I like someone with a sense of humor but I am not sure what you meen hun LOL I am a bit dense tonight had a lonnnnnnng day lol thanks for the read though , and if you will help me that would be wonderful :) ... sometimes I dont ask enough I was told today lol love and higgest bugs Jayne x x
yenti

yenti

16 years 9 months ago

Jayne

I think that there was to many (was) words in that stanza and it didn't join the two lines together very well, You take care and get better soon, Yours Ian.T And get some Rest Badness
Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Ian

My goodness your right !! LOL I couldnt see the forest for the trees .. will definately fix that now thank you so very much .. I didnt see it and I am always so careful of that thesedays , have been sleeping a lot Ian , so I am resting tooo much but sleep is healing they say ... much love and higgest bugs Jayne x x