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Sep 09, 2009
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Voices in the Smoke
Oh man! i love a dancing fire
Although I often speculate:
how many voices are softly
taken away to meet their fate,
they swiftly become aloft,
smoke lost inside the sky
it increases thoughtfully;
in its own sweet time. Oh,
how many voices could be
silenced or removed?
unheard, unsighted
notions disapproved.
climb the heights
oh dear voices,
being robbed of,
lifes choices
do you feel
distress or,
firm sadness?
In thought
our breath,
ultimately,
fuels the fire.
Even as you twist
and contort.
while in
my eyes
this world
condemned
you
to
your
_____________________________demise_____
Although I often speculate:
how many voices are softly
taken away to meet their fate,
they swiftly become aloft,
smoke lost inside the sky
it increases thoughtfully;
in its own sweet time. Oh,
how many voices could be
silenced or removed?
unheard, unsighted
notions disapproved.
climb the heights
oh dear voices,
being robbed of,
lifes choices
do you feel
distress or,
firm sadness?
In thought
our breath,
ultimately,
fuels the fire.
Even as you twist
and contort.
while in
my eyes
this world
condemned
you
to
your
_____________________________demise_____
— Bosscombat, Sep 09, 2009
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Critiques
Seren
16 years 9 months ago
Fucking brilliant nothing
Bosscombat
16 years 9 months ago
:)
Kailashana
16 years 9 months ago
I think JC took the words
Bosscombat
16 years 9 months ago
:)
Seren
16 years 9 months ago
((((((((((((CONGRATES))))))))
Bosscombat
16 years 9 months ago
:)
Geezer
16 years 9 months ago
Brightness is necessary....
Bosscombat
16 years 9 months ago
:)
lyz
16 years 9 months ago
Dear Boss
Bosscombat
16 years 9 months ago
:)