silver-grey

Just brilliant, what more can I say , I am in awe of this write , love Jayne x x

...why this works...is so shouldn't with it's weird breaks...but it really works. My reptilian brain won't let me write like this, mine have to be in some order...oh what it must be to be able to express yourself this way. I am consumed by this piece. A great job, HS ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth and yet nobody sees me".

You know how to keep the interest a flow with words of beauty that can change the color of a day. and the love behind this write has changed mine. Loved it. Love Lyz. XX

Both of these were very nice ,were easy to read held my thoughts. all is good. Mantiscepter

Is this a floating letter on the waves of time where the writer is the rain hammering the letters inevitably indelibly into the sheets of our bodies the tossed soul's fabric love, the subject for ever the subject of our existence, our dreams and aspirations ever Ann over the sea with love.

are so comforting, esp. with regard to loneliness. "there is nowhere I am untouched" - yes, to not be touched by human hands at one point or another is not to be untouched, thank goodness. I dispute these lines, though: we are diminished creatures here if not for dreams, I can think of many things that do not dream and aren't diminished. I feel things are diminished when they are not what they are meant to be, not because they lack some kind of capacity. Oddly, I guess that means the more choice you have, the more opportunity to diminish yourself.