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Barren Ground

Tendrils of love
draping the page,
all of my anger
tussles a cage

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A Shock of light
did rivet to dark,
essence of self
was rent apart

A creeping doubt
crawled into mind,
this mimicking parody
was perceived as kind

Lulled to contentment
that was the charm,
and feeling safe
from all that harms

Awoken from slumber
my quietness rests,
this dragon roars
its final best

Painting the moon
with the ash from my tears,
paper mache in the
crater of fears

Saying goodbye
to all the good,
a word of blessing
will find new root

Fighting a battle
far from all sight,
this hollow face
has fled into night

Diverging to shadows
that shape the door,
I close my eyes
as faith hits the floor

A broken vessel
black in design,
lays in my palm
bled of desire

Sitting and rocking
in silent screams,
my heart lies withered
stripped of all dreams

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As barren ground
crumbled with mind,
darkness surrounds me
bleeding all time

— Seren, Sep 08, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page, W.H.Auden, to many and various to include them all ...

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Bosscombat

16 years 9 months ago

:)

No need to be sorry this is a great poem...made me a little frowny sad though... cmon Jay knee 2 bums gis a smile :p You'll have to tell me the story behind this one <3 ♣
Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

((((((((((((((((SMILE))))))))

((((((((((((((((SMILE)))))))))))))))) lol you happy now, LOL sorry hun I am just got the black dog chasing me I am out writing him lmao :P love you Jayne x x
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 9 months ago

Dearest Jayne

This poem is a study of depression and despair. Perhaps writing about it will lessen the load. I truly do hope this is the case. These lines say it all for me: Fighting a battle far from all sight, this hollow face has fled into night Diverging to shadows that shape the door, I close my eyes as faith hits the floor A broken vessel black in design, lays in my palm bled of desire Sitting and rocking in silent screams, my heart lies withered stripped of all dreams your words weave images, I hadn't yet imagined. Brava... Love, Cat
Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dearest Cat, thats about the

Dearest Cat, thats about the best compliment you could give me(((hug))) I am blah but a good sleep will fix that, just tired and blue thanks for the read and the support its always nice to know your around ... love biggest hugz jayne x x
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ziggy

16 years 9 months ago

barren ground

enda, patrick collins.i love the title , you indeed are out writing the black dog who chases you down , to many good lines to pick one out another fine write always ziggy
Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Patrick

LOL cannot believe i said that this morning 'I am out writing the black dog', thanks for the read and the comment its much appreciated ... Love and hugz Jayne x x x
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lyz

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Seren

Give the dog a bone. Yea, is a little bit of a sad write, but hey, what a write. Your words sink in like a sponge. You are good, and feelings flow freely, this is a great thing. Takes away a little of the darkness and hopefully a little ray of sunshine will peek in and bite u on the arse. Lol. A little laugh for u. I was upset about?, and my friend just walked straight up to me and slapped my face hard. Me in shock, no reason, apology, nothing. All she said was put the kettle on and make me coffee. Still laugh about it, needless to say, I make coffee straight away now. Lol. My sick humor is on the loose again. Must be the bubbles in my Aero Bar. Ha. No, this is a lovely poem my dear. Love from Lyz. XX Hope all's well now and you are smiling.
Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Lyz

From time to time i spit my dummy or have a rant orrr just have a cry LOL had a reeeeeeeally bad night last night and well this was the result ... I am ok feeling better today, sorta LOL the suns out the birds are singing and I wish they would all shut the fuck up lmao ;) OK so I am not quite right LOL but I am getting there ... you better be smiling I am making a clown of myself ;) love and higgest bugs ..Jayne x x x
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mantiscepter

16 years 9 months ago

Sadness

sadness reigns, in soft refrain' on this page lain, before me torn from shadow ,of a lady's sweet fight,melting her heart" in memories trite. Ok I know this is not the usual way you write, but it was so good, I had to throw in my own 2 cents. I thought it was splendid. Mantiscepter
Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dear John

You would be surprised to find that I write quiet a few of these since you have been here I ahve been writing lots of fantasy LOL every now and then I throw one of these at you guys , thank you for that beautiful little verse cheered me up :) muchly love and higgest bugs Jayne x x x
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 9 months ago

Despair Not ....

Despair not fair maid, The evil,darkness, shall be cast aside, as the brightness of the day stuffs a sword of hope up his bum! I shall endevour to shine the fire of a Sir Gee smile on him, and burn the sucker's ass! Chin up Hun, L & Hugz, Gee
Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

LMFAO !!!! GEE :D big smile

he he I love you Gee I was just sitting here being a mooning mary and read that and roared laughing they think I have lost my mind again LOL , I will keep them in suspense for a while:P Thanks for that hun I needed a laugh (((hug))) love Jaynee
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 9 months ago

So welcome....

Don't you just love it, when they don't know what you're on about? L & Hugz, Sir Gee.