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Fleur MacDonald
Fleur MacDonald
Sep 09, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

The Ball of Reason

I found
my reason
when it
fell apart
fell flat
on the
floor
I bent
down
to pick
it up
and grasped
at nothing
my vision
impaired
I grabbed
at the
floor
I've lost
my reason
it fell
so hard
I heard
it crack
and shatter
I've lost
my reason
to have
it no
more
I can't
go on
without
my
ball of reason...

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 8 months ago

hello

I really enjoyed this poem, probably because I, too have lost my reason! Always, Cat
Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

My god this ones awesome

My god this ones awesome Fleur darlin' you have reasons your one talented woman ;) that I happen to think the world of, your poetry has been outstanding lately , just thought i would mention it ;) love and higgest bugs Jayne x x
L

lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Fleur

You have not lost ur reason, u had a reason to write this brilliant write. I enjoy reading ur work. It gives the reader a touch of reality in their own lives. Love it. Love Lyz XX