Rett

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Damp Tangled Sheets (Adult Content)

Damp Tangled Sheets

Those wicked eyes and creamy thighs
And fleshy globes that hypnotize
I've cursed your name, wrapped it in flame
And still I love you to my shame

Love's heady sweat, in sin beget
Sweetness that I remember yet
Damp tangled sheet, wetness so sweet
Your shivering in loves defeat

Shameless in lust, Satan's succubus
Mounting in passion's hard thrust
Moonlight and lace, a frenetic pace
The musky droplets I chase

Flames frozen in ice, a wicked device
Pink tipped mountains entice
Thrust into the pit, burned with fires lit
To base passions we both submit

Cursing your name, your body I claim
Till we are consumed by the flame
My shame knows no end, neither foe nor friend
Until our passions expend

Both love and hate define my fate
Cursed by lust we cannot sate
Shall death by fire quench this desire
Upon the flaming funeral pyre?

— Rett, Sep 07, 2009

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Region, Country: Southern Texas, USA

Favorite Poets: Dickenson, Longfellow

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Critiques

Barbara Writes

16 years 9 months ago

Naughty, Naughty lol

Rett

16 years 9 months ago

Thanks Barbara

Don't usually write these, but wanted to see what I could do with it. *LOL* Glad you enjoyed it. Respectfully, Rett: "When I was born I was so surprised I didn't talk for a year and a half." Gracie Allen

Barbara Writes

16 years 9 months ago

Rett

I find it amazing when we can write beautifully what we are not. Great imagination mixed with sheer, creative, inborn, poetic talent. ~~~~~~~~~ Be whoever you are At all times, and Remember that Because of this, people will Always Respect, and Admire you ©2008Leonard Respectfully Yours, Barbara

lyz

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Rett

What a sensual write, flowed well when read slowly.I hope your fire lives on and if you have not written anything like this before, well, I couldn't tell. Enjoyed. Lyz XX

Rett

16 years 9 months ago

Thank you Lyz

I have written two or three, but it isn't the type of writing I normally do so it is rare anyone will see this type of write from me. *L* I am glad you enjoyed it. Sometimes it is strange what a remark made in passing will set off in a poet's mind. I appreciate it a lot. Respectfully, Rett: "When I was born I was so surprised I didn't talk for a year and a half." Gracie Allen

Electric Blue

16 years 9 months ago

Damp Tangle Sheets

Rett I too knew this once upon a time I met my demon angel with eyes of ocean blue we too passed this barrier of fire and ice to our delight. For me he is the one and only one that will ever tresspass and share this amazing fire and ice that melts by the raging fires within without. Maybe one day I will know this again from my demon angel by his indigo blue angel who waits for eternity to be wooed again real soon My friend I am in awe such passion you remind me of but long for again and again maybe one day................ Electric blue so blue

Rett

16 years 9 months ago

Thank you Maggie

Glad it brought back memories. wooo, do I ever have some. *wink* I hope the earth and heavens move for you my friend in more ways than one! ((hugs)) Respectfully, Rett: "When I was born I was so surprised I didn't talk for a year and a half." Gracie Allen

Electric Blue

16 years 9 months ago

Damp Tangle Sheets

Rett Memories are all i have but long for this again maybe someday someone will see me for who i am and that i was always there Electric Blue

Kailashana

16 years 9 months ago

Well, hh do daclare, your

Well, hh do daclare, your succubus should meet my incubus and leave us both alone... or maybe not. lol. Enjoyed muchly.. ~A

Rett

16 years 9 months ago

Well honey chile

Thanky, glad y'all liked it. *LOL* Respectfully, Rett: "When I was born I was so surprised I didn't talk for a year and a half." Gracie Allen

mantiscepter

16 years 9 months ago

Sate

Wait, let me read this again. wow pretty busy poem,I had to change my shirt, twice trying to keep up the pace. All kidding aside, was Great Loved every thing about this poem exciting, sensual, wonderful ride into passions rage.... Mantiscepter

Rett

16 years 9 months ago

Thanks Scepter

I am very pleased you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for the kind words. Sorry about the shirts. *L* Respectfully, Rett: "When I was born I was so surprised I didn't talk for a year and a half." Gracie Allen

Barbara Writes

16 years 9 months ago

Rett

After reading the comments, I should never comment on these type poems because I read into them what I want rather than what is actually there-I shake in utter fear at the thought of such an encounter. It Is probably why I miss the obvious meaning. Lol Great writing none the less.:) ~~~~~~~~~ Be whoever you are At all times, and Remember that Because of this, people will Always Respect, and Admire you ©2008Leonard Respectfully Yours, Barbara

Rett

16 years 9 months ago

Hi again Barbara

I was intentionally vague to see if some would take it as a passion -filled encounter or as a hate-filled or violent encounter. Truth is passion can be both a love/hate type thing at times or maybe I should say Hate to love it. *L* Thanks my friend. I always enjoy your take on things. always fresh and good. Respectfully, Rett: "When I was born I was so surprised I didn't talk for a year and a half." Gracie Allen

Nordic cloud

16 years 9 months ago

Terrfific, a very well described 'happening'

Yes mantisceptor, he's been and gone and done it this time!! Rett you've written a fine poem here, although for me the sensitivity was cloaked in daring thrusts and therefore touched me not. But a very well described 'happening' and one which one feels most people know of! Oh I am clumsy here, I did think you wrote well as it flows so well too, well done Rett. Love from Ann of Norway.

Rett

16 years 9 months ago

Thank you Ann

Sorry it didn't touch you, but glad you thought it was a good write anyway. *G* Not everything will always touch or be liked by everyone, but I am always extremely pleased to hear from you and catch your take on it. I appreciate it my Norwegian friend. Respectfully, Rett: "When I was born I was so surprised I didn't talk for a year and a half." Gracie Allen

DawningDaytripper

16 years 8 months ago

Wow, that was steamy Paw,

Wow, that was steamy Paw, Now you know it flowed but you did over use a few words in your vocabulary, you used flame twice in consecutive stanza's and flaming once and flames to. Passions is in two consecutive stanza's as well, and few others but I will stop nit picking I am sure you get the point. But I am all steamed up and a touch excited to, good read. Julie