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Heart Strings

 White rims
of twilight
filled velvety 
blue

are dreams
that are many 
sparkling eyeS
So true

melting
with passion
you change 
rolling hills

to Mountains
of splendor
turning warmness
to chills

as creeks
flow to rivers
so do
your charms

like a lighthouse
with beacons
extending
it's arms

an outline
so fragile
a frailness
unfolds

like a flower
in springtime
poetic stories
are told

you are 
my dream girl
that every
night brings

Enchantress 
of darkness
Heart player
of my strings
— mantiscepter, Sep 07, 2009

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Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dear John

This is just beautiful my friend I adored every line I cannot pick out a favourite they are all beautiful and so is the lady in your poem, you enchanted her with your words ... much love and hugz Jayne x x
M

mantiscepter

16 years 9 months ago

Heart

Thank you for your read, I'm so glad this one was was good for you, a heart is a funny thing, it can change,rule over, decide,feel things, that can't be felt. Mantiscepter
L

lyz

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Mantiscepter, aww

I hope this was written for your wife. This is such an elegant poem. Warms the heart. Now this is my morning coffee fave. I will go and make another one, and read this again. Wish my better half could write like this. Very beautiful, I love this one. Thanks, Lyz XX
M

mantiscepter

16 years 9 months ago

Hearts

Thanks for your time,reviewing this poem, your comments were welcomed, Mantiscepter
greeneyes

greeneyes

16 years 9 months ago

Mantisceptor

Wow! This was so beautiful. Im with Jayne its too hard to pick a favorite line because the whole thing is beautiful! Love, Greeneyes
M

mantiscepter

16 years 9 months ago

Twilight

Thanks for the lovely comments, love to hear from, you, Jayne, Raven, Lyz and a few others that have good views, and their own ways of looking at the world, glad to have you for support, love your poetry. Thanks ever so much. Mantiscepter. P.S. Ann of Norway, did not like my other picture, the man with the stern look. so I replaced it with.
greeneyes

greeneyes

16 years 9 months ago

lol!

I love all your pictures! This one is great!