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Sep 07, 2009
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Heart Strings
White rims
of twilight
filled velvety
blue
are dreams
that are many
sparkling eyeS
So true
melting
with passion
you change
rolling hills
to Mountains
of splendor
turning warmness
to chills
as creeks
flow to rivers
so do
your charms
like a lighthouse
with beacons
extending
it's arms
an outline
so fragile
a frailness
unfolds
like a flower
in springtime
poetic stories
are told
you are
my dream girl
that every
night brings
Enchantress
of darkness
Heart player
of my strings
of twilight
filled velvety
blue
are dreams
that are many
sparkling eyeS
So true
melting
with passion
you change
rolling hills
to Mountains
of splendor
turning warmness
to chills
as creeks
flow to rivers
so do
your charms
like a lighthouse
with beacons
extending
it's arms
an outline
so fragile
a frailness
unfolds
like a flower
in springtime
poetic stories
are told
you are
my dream girl
that every
night brings
Enchantress
of darkness
Heart player
of my strings
— mantiscepter, Sep 07, 2009
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Critiques
Seren
16 years 9 months ago
Dear John
mantiscepter
16 years 9 months ago
Heart
lyz
16 years 9 months ago
Dear Mantiscepter, aww
mantiscepter
16 years 9 months ago
Hearts
greeneyes
16 years 9 months ago
Mantisceptor
mantiscepter
16 years 9 months ago
Twilight
greeneyes
16 years 9 months ago
lol!