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Sep 07, 2009
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In the the twilight
of Summer,
when I thought
we may possible
die without
this love,
I heard your name
in the happy jingles
of the ocean waves.
The moment,
don't remember,
overtaken as I was
by the possible
features of your face.
And in exchange
for the frustrations,
felt at times,
I was the only witness
of your sobbing,
when the day fell
on its knees
to caress the sand.
It was then that I heard
the loving phrasing
with which you
whispered to me
the wondrous
secrets of your love.
— hugo la rosa, Sep 07, 2009
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Seren
16 years 10 months ago
Dearest Hugo
hugo la rosa
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Dear Jayne
lyz
16 years 10 months ago
Dear Hugo
hugo la rosa
16 years 10 months ago
Dear Lyz
Kailashana
16 years 10 months ago
Neither do I, Jayne… some
hugo la rosa
16 years 10 months ago
Kailashana
raskin
16 years 10 months ago
Strong
hugo la rosa
16 years 10 months ago
Dear Raskin
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