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Sep 06, 2009
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the thousandth time
Rain hugs these hills
holding to these slopes,
as closely as my attention
to you,
in a summers dress.
Whose fields I follow
in contoured coloured cotton
on your skin.
Droplets clinging with spring, embrace
these finest stems, sheerest surface,
softest thin;
silvered curving filling to release.
Tremulous is tumbled
for the thousandth time
into this dream of us.
holding to these slopes,
as closely as my attention
to you,
in a summers dress.
Whose fields I follow
in contoured coloured cotton
on your skin.
Droplets clinging with spring, embrace
these finest stems, sheerest surface,
softest thin;
silvered curving filling to release.
Tremulous is tumbled
for the thousandth time
into this dream of us.
— Craig Norris, Sep 06, 2009
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Rottiestyl
16 years 10 months ago
Love the first stanza. It
Craig Norris
16 years 10 months ago
thank you Kim
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
Dear Craig
Craig Norris
16 years 10 months ago
Jayne
odd molly
16 years 10 months ago
Craig I really like your
Craig Norris
16 years 10 months ago
dear Molly
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