Shadow Elf

a
shadow
of his
former elf
this poetry
thing
keeps
him ticking

what makes
you tick?

when all
is said
and done
it's down
to this

"freedom
of
speech"

the need
to write
and be
heard!

to be
scorned and
riled
to critique
and
criticize

good
or bad
tell me
I'm good
tell me
I'm bad

I'm still
here...

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Comments

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

I am here too :) somewhere,

I am here too :) somewhere, lol love you fleur he would love this one just as I do ... love and biggest hugz Jayne x x x

Bosscombat

16 years 8 months ago

:)

booze makes me tick :) keeps me all fueled up and jazz :P im sure jess is lovin' all these poems and I await, with baited breath, his triumphant return ♣

lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Fleur.

I am way behind, but I am here finally. love your write's for Jess, And as I have said, you are a true hearted friend. Great Write, Love Lyz XX

Candlewitch

16 years 8 months ago

hello

I'm sure that this piece would make Jess-elf smile, as it did for me. I wrote and posted a poem for him too. I've, been shy in sending it to him, in case he doesn't like it. The last thing on earth I would want to do is cause our favorite Ratbag any discomfort. Always, Cat