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A Sailor Of Dreams

 The time went swiftly, His thoughts were deep,
with the memories of loved ones, that would join his sleep.
Days were as minutes, thoughts close of two, that had seen
many ventures, companioned life through. On the wings of
kindness,this life was his mate, holding firm as a vessel,
dreams gave birth to his fate. A weathered old sailor,
alone, fast to his room, surrounded by land now.
seemed as if . his doom. but deep in his void he could
sense the room moving, smelling fresh salty air,
see the windows as portholes,seagulls flying in pairs.
He could hear the rough voices, of companions long gone,
feel the slap of the sails,as these visions held strong.
Each day was the same, his smile could be viewed,
as he rocked in his corner, humming soft sailing blues,
His forehead was weathered,deep wrinkles did show,
that stretched to his cheek bones,eyes black,softly glowed.
A brow stern, not angry brushed as hedges above
with sparse greying hair, not many could love. but loved
the old man was,though lost in the words,he found a love
and kindness in" his world: seen and heard.
 





— mantiscepter, Sep 06, 2009

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lyz

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Mantiscepter

I would hate a lonely sailors life, no matter how many adventures, but if it is in the blood. Sad that land has now became his entrapment but like us all he has his dreams. I feel sad for him. God u can tell a story.Like I said before, keeps us wanting more. And this one is sssooooo good. 3rd read and I will post this comment.Lol. Brilliant, Lyz. x
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mantiscepter

16 years 9 months ago

Sailor

Hi lyz, makes me sad too,When I was young, my Mum, worked in a rest, or retirement type home, and I would hurry after school, to help her with her work, and sometimes I would have to wait outside the building, where seated were all these lovely people, who would smile and wave ,asking questions, or telling stories, and some of those,beautiful times ,still rustle in my memories, and come out in verse. sorry hate to carry on. need to wipe and go. Thanks for your kind words. Mantiscepter
Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dear John

The poignant pining , ahhh a sailors life is not for me ... again another splendid write my friend loved it immensely ... love and hugz Jayne x x x We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall ...
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mantiscepter

16 years 9 months ago

A Sailor Of Dreams

Hello Lynn, nice to see your words,grace my screen. I almost passed on submitting this poem, then I changed my mind at the last minute, thanks for words of encouragement. I look back on them,for support, Hope you and yours, have a lovely evening. as always. John. Mantiscepter
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lyz

16 years 9 months ago

Hey u

Stop calling Jayne , Lynn. Ha! It is getting to be funny.The comment above. You nut, I am still laughing. Say something Jayne, aka. Seren. OH from Lyz. Smile.
Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Lyz and John

LMAO hes such a nice man I didnt want to correct him my quote is the thing putting him off Lyz ... but it is kinda funny not the only person calling me Lynn LOL I must look like a Lynn John Dear friend I didn't want to correct you huni ... my names Jayne-Chloe or JayC or Jayne or Jayknee 2Bums LOL you can call me whatever you like darlin' :) big smiles and thanks for the laugh Lyz ya nutter :P Love and biggest hug to you both JAYNE-CHLOE And John please don't feel bad :) It was more funny than anything :)
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lyz

16 years 9 months ago

I am still laughing

I think I am having a fit. He is fantastic and he will find this funny, hope he will, or I have nearly piddled myself for nothing. The pic of ur cat is apt, scaredy cat. Im glad ur here to back me, he might turn. After seeing Lynne written by some, I just laugh. Warped sense of humor I suppose. Luv ya! even if you thought this reply was from the Man. Not. Lol. Lyz. Xx
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lyz

16 years 9 months ago

SORRY

Another 5 for ya. If I knew how to put a smiley face on this I would, but if u could see mine, well, u know me by now. I am still your fan. I'm tellin ya, must be the moon. Lyz XX