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Sep 07, 2009
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Your Voice
In the the twilight
of Summer,
when I thought
we may possible
die without
this love,
I heard your name
in the happy jingles
of the ocean waves.
The moment,
don't remember,
overtaken as I was
by the possible
features of your face.
And in exchange
for the frustrations,
felt at times,
I was the only witness
of your sobbing,
when the day fell
on its knees
to caress the sand.
It was then that I heard
the loving phrasing
with which you
whispered to me
the wondrous
secrets of your love.
Comments
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dearest Hugo
hugo la rosa
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Jayne
lyz
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Hugo
hugo la rosa
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Lyz
Kailashana
16 years 8 months ago
Neither do I, Jayne… some
hugo la rosa
16 years 8 months ago
Kailashana
raskin
16 years 8 months ago
Strong
hugo la rosa
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Raskin