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Inebriate Truths

Uppers, downers
all in betweens
float into my abode
let us all be fiends.
You'll be staggering
and grinding your teeth
we'll play Street Fighter 2
to test our dexterity
we'll turn up our music
for late night prosperity
I'll swiftly drink my whiskey completely
and I'll do it again
if you pour it just as quickly
don't forget the mixture's half 'n' half
don't be pouring minuscule portions
into my favourite glass
and hurry up with it
i want to turn this shine
into a fully fledged glow
so now that my inhibitions are low
shh here's a secret
I'll tell you if you'll keep it
I've got myself fooled
I'm anything but diverse
I just write a story, make it rhyme,
and call it poetry or verse
— Bosscombat, Sep 05, 2009

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Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dearest Matty ,

LMAO !!! you my darlin friend drunken master at poetry lmfao !!! omg this ones too good ... the problem is I have been pissed with you and know that this is the truth lmfao I love you huni ... this ones awesome !! hugz and love Jayne x x x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall ...
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Bosscombat

16 years 9 months ago

:)

Hehehe I write some of my best with a healthy glow :p Glad u liked it hun <3 ♣
Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

You make rhyme look cool btw

You make rhyme look cool btw !! I make it look airy faery lmfao :P love you ;) "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 9 months ago

hello

From the poems of yours that I've read, I'd say you are plenty fluent and diverse. Always, Cat
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lyz

16 years 9 months ago

Hi

Always a brilliant rhymerer, poeter, verserer. Here's 5 for you, straight. Are you glowing now? Lol. Well done. Lyz.
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Bosscombat

16 years 9 months ago

:)

Heya Lyz Thanks mate :) Indeed im all aglow ♣