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mantiscepter
Sep 04, 2009 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

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 Have I missed something;

In this life.?

The sweet smell" of a rose.

Or the kiss" of my wife.

Will they be, for me to find.?

Or will the world" To me.

Be unkind.?





— mantiscepter, Sep 04, 2009

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Darya

16 years 10 months ago

it will be if you keep

it will be if you keep asking for self stamped envelope : ) Oh ... this is a nice poem ...i give it five stars Darya
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mantiscepter

16 years 10 months ago

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Thanks for the kind words,nice to meet you. glad you liked the poem.I do have envelopes. Mantiscepter
Seren

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

Dear John LOL ... :P

We ask for what our hearts desire not what anothers heart desires , and I think this ones just beautiful ask for the moon ;) and the stars will fall :) much love and hugz Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
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mantiscepter

16 years 10 months ago

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We all have certain desires, and mine are filled each time I get a wonderful response, like this. Thanks Lynn, sorry this is late... John. Mantiscepter
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lyz

16 years 10 months ago

Dear Mantiscepter

Seek and u shall find. I think u already have. Brilliant. Lyz.
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mantiscepter

16 years 10 months ago

Sentiment

Marvelous Darling, If any one ever asks, I'll Have you to back me. Thanks lyz Mantiscepter
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mantiscepter

16 years 10 months ago

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There is always a place to start, and a place to finish, It's where we go in between, that helps us to see the obvious direction we need to head. Sunrise-Sunset: potato-Potato tomato-Tomato. Thanks for your review. Mantiscepter
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 10 months ago

hello

Very nice, introspective. Always, Cat
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mantiscepter

16 years 10 months ago

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Thanx cat It's nice to be read by you, hope you enjoyed it. I have to change up, once in awhile. Makes it more interesting, Keeps my pallet ,sharp with colorful words. thanks again. Mantiscepter
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 10 months ago

You jump like the leaping of a fish out of the water

You jump like the leaping of a fish out of the water he wonders whether he has missed something while all the time he is in his element, the water where he is at home and happy. Liked this jump, and look forward to more. Yours Ann of Norway
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mantiscepter

16 years 10 months ago

Jump

Nice to see you again,Ann.your thoughts, and comments are well taken and enjoyed, you are well versed and hold a good command of your words. which I love. [ I've missed you ] And thats what life brings to us all. Mantiscepter

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