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Sep 04, 2009
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Jess-Elf
Jess-elf
I feel the hole
in which he used to fit,
in this house of poets.
But I find no trace
of his special residue,
this elf so unusual.
Outspoken in his opinions,
sometimes abrasive-
sometimes humorous-
sometimes kind-
but always honest-
probably one of
the most honorable
poets in a host
of thousands.
Many voices cry out
in the uneasy silence,
for him to return.
He is lost to us,
can't even find his
responses to our poems
to derive comfort from.
Like a sailor lost at sea,
I am drowning in
the lack of him;
my heart strings keen
to his multifaceted memory.
— Candlewitch, Sep 04, 2009
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Critiques
Seren
16 years 9 months ago
Dearest Cat
Kailashana
16 years 9 months ago
Courage. Jess has the
Bonitaj
16 years 9 months ago
I once had the good fortune
Blue_Halcyon
16 years 9 months ago
Hmmmm
Kailashana
16 years 9 months ago
I’m reminded of an old
lyz
16 years 9 months ago
Dear Candlewitch.
mantiscepter
16 years 9 months ago
Missing
Candlewitch
16 years 9 months ago
Thank you All
Kailashana
16 years 9 months ago
How awesomely simple. I am
Wafi
16 years 9 months ago
Love You For This, Cat!
Candlewitch
16 years 9 months ago
*Hugs, Wafi
pleiades
16 years 9 months ago
i don’t know thesubject of
Candlewitch
16 years 9 months ago
hello Pleiades
infinite_dwarf
16 years 9 months ago
Hi Cat
Candlewitch
16 years 9 months ago
hello Jess-Dwarf
weirdelf
16 years 3 months ago
oh cat! thankyou!