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TINTED GLASSES

TINTED GLASSES Our chief of Police issued an orderBanning cars with tinted glassesExcept those cleared by him aloneTo protect men with money and power The charge was considered sensibleTo stop masking men of the underworldHiding in the day to commit their crimesAgainst the innocent and the unsuspecting Tinted glasses became a status thingSeparating the poor from the richOfficials of government took advantageTo parade in limousine cars, unnoticed So enjoined, it became a serious offenceTo drive a tinted car without a permitAs checkpoints doubled to make sureAnd bank notes pass from hand to hand Tinted carriages come in from the wharfsCustoms and police see and say nothingUntil they are bought and registeredThen the buyers are made to suffer for it We do not manufacture these cars hereNot even the components or spare partsOur Industries are not well equippedYet, we refuse to change with the times Where is your clearance, they ask all the timeA law abiding citizen becomes an offenderFor buying a car with tinted rear side glassesAnd runs into trouble with the police Make them suffer, make them spendYet there is no law in the status bookThat says we should not drive these carsThan a mere pronouncement from a man



 
— t. reflexion, Sep 04, 2009

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Country/Region: NGA

Favorite Poets: Inspired by an article in an old manuscript , It reads:, AXIOMS OF PERFECTION, In the physical order – In the realization of the dream of beauty, In the moral order – In the realization of the dream of love, In the intellectual order – In the realization of dream of poetry, In the spiritual order – In the realization of the dream of the mystics

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themoonman

themoonman

16 years 9 months ago

T...

How are you doing? Good I hope. I found your write quite interesting on many levels, firstly, the tinted windows, it would seem at first that the idea to control this was accepted by the community, until it became more about how much money you have. Sad but true, the law can be bought off. Even when it hasn't been made a law officially. Here in the state I live in, there is a degree of tint allowed... for everyone. It may change state to state too, which makes it a bit like you there, you may be breaking the law without knowing it just by buying a vehicle. and the unsuspected... and the unsuspecting(maybe) enjoyed reading and learning Richard
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

16 years 8 months ago

Richard

You get the picture right on the way things go about with tinted glasses here.The partiality of the order issued by the chief of Police, the abuse of official position by his men on the streets, the extortion of money from motorists because they don't want trouble, and even the ignorant on the side of the victims. Thank you for the comments, reading and the suggestion, how be it, correction on the word 'unsuspected'. Thank you once more and best wishes. T.