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beyond boundaries

Shedding skin changing tide 
under the lunar moon did hide 
benign no more washed up on 
a fragrant shore ,

Broken through tasted the 
fragrant honey dew 
standing  at the rainbows 
end and watch the rays of light 
descend

I have blown about on a whispering 
breeze , the winds of change denied
A chill breeze did blow and it did grow 
to a fearsome angry storm , from rock
to sand with grain in hand the rhythm of 
                 life a breeze .


— ziggy, Sep 04, 2009

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ziggy

16 years 9 months ago

beyond boundaries

enda, patrick collins. hi there nice comments glad you read it , i was not sure if the two halfs came together the right way many thanks and cheers for the stars , yours ziggy
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lyz

16 years 9 months ago

Dear ziggy

I liked how it flowed and yes what a storm. I feel it came together nicely, my opinion, and the last stanza, a brilliant play of words. Loved it. Lyz. x
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ziggy

16 years 9 months ago

HI BUD

enda, patrick collins. NOT A STORM IN A TEA CUP , LOL THANKS AGAIN THIS ONE GOT CHOPPED AND CHANGED BUT ENDED UP JUST LEAVING IT AS IS CHEERS NICE THANKS FOR THE READ AND ALL THOSE BRIGHT STARS EDD X