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My Poem

Every morning
you pick my poem 
from the stem 
like a flower
placing it in the crystal vase 
by the windowdo you think sunshine will help it to still grow?
or watching the rain behind the closed window is going to satisfy its thirst?for you
it is only good for a few hours 
perhaps a day or two 
till you toss it out to be buried in the gardenbut it is there
in the garden
out of your sight
that it becomes alive 
under the shade of that apple tree
where the red ink stains my fingers
it comes back to lifethere is no time to repent 
it already had molded my soil into the shape of a bird 
flying solo in the air
with no regret ......

AKA Darya

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Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Darya

this Writing is touching on the profound nice work :) I liked it immensely I look forward to reading more from your pen ... Kind regards Jayne Edit Comment:- came back to read again and noticed my stars :) were wrong as I often am "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
themoonman

themoonman

16 years 8 months ago

Darya...

great poem!! thoroughly enjoyed the experience! thanks for sharing it here with us. Richard
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Bert Lamrick

16 years 8 months ago

I loved the experience

of this poem. It touched a deep place within me, profoundly. Beautiful. ~Rick
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Bert Lamrick

16 years 8 months ago

PS

It's worth it...
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lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Darya

Brilliant write and only if we could fly away with no regrets. You took us there. This is a great. Lyz.
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Wafi

16 years 8 months ago

Such A Wonderful Poem, Darya!

Such a wonderful poem, Darya! I will say "Aafarin", my friend... Proufound indeed... Sincerely, Wafi "Culture, location and beliefs; All vanish with love!" ~Afzal Shauq~
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Darya

16 years 8 months ago

Wafi,thanks for the ”

Wafi, thanks for the " Afarin " : ) and I like your quote........ that is such a true statement .... darya
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 8 months ago

non, je ne regrette

non, je ne regrette rien... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GfXxn-gP1p0
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Dalton

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Darya

"Flying solo in the air with no regret..." We should all be so lucky. A lovely poem. Flows well off the tongue. The red ink instead of blood coaxed from a vein. A pretty poem keep them coming.