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Common Stranger
“So what exactly happens,
When we meet?” I ask.
“We’re generally able to see each other,” he retorts,
Sorting his way through my thoughts
“But it’s truly a rare vision
These unruly sporadic collisions
You see, it’s seeing me
That sets off an occurrence
And I’ll have to save us both
Before it worsens.”
Looking around for prying eyes and ears
And With a tone as slight as a feather
He says “you’ll see what I mean,
If you ever get your shit together.”
He rests confidently back in his chair
Now speaking in a voice loud and clear
“You’ll be a force to be reckoned with.
C’mon, listen to what I’m saying here,
If you can take command of your gift,
The world’s basically at your fingertips.”
He glares wide-eyed at me,
Expecting me to talk
But I have this horrid chalky taste
On my tongue and on my lips
Although, it’s entirely possible
That I’m imagining it.
He finally tires of waiting
And says in goaded tone
“You’ll keep perplexing yourself
Wondering if I even existed.
If I was just a mysterious figment of mind
Or if you can keep your thought process consistent.”
I smirk and lightly state
“I know you’re not real,
I can rid you from my sight
Whenever I feel”
He swiftly reacts
“But maybe I am!
I have flesh and bone potential!
There’s more I need to tell you,
And listen close, coz’ it’s essential.
You ought to learn to keep your head down
You’re fortunate I found you.
There’re others here prowling ‘round.
More than a few have grouped, collectively
They have used or abused their power effectively
They do not see a use for civil exchange yet
They don’t want rivalry
And see most people as a threat.
To put this in terms you will understand,
If you are discovered,
You should plan for reprimand.”
And with that,
He vanished in a blink.
Sitting there, I ponder, alone
About whether he’ll ever appear again.
I decide it’s beyond unknown
I seize what he told me
And choose to take note.
Knowing that I’m not alone,
And there are others
That understand the things I don’t,
It changes everything. It humbles me,
Even though I know
It was my brain projecting all along
It allows me to warm my core
Allows me to trust in myself
And I didn’t have that before.
Critiques
Seren
16 years 9 months ago
Dear Matty
Bosscombat
16 years 9 months ago
:)
CyberSpace
16 years 9 months ago
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Bosscombat
16 years 9 months ago
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Diatom Shells
16 years 9 months ago
hello boss
Bosscombat
16 years 9 months ago
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lyz
16 years 9 months ago
Dear Bosscombat
Bosscombat
16 years 9 months ago
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Geezer
16 years 9 months ago
Scary!
Bosscombat
16 years 9 months ago
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