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Fleur MacDonald
Fleur MacDonald
Sep 04, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Ruby

She's red
of course
didn't name
her just
because she
is
her sexy
lovely sound
when I
caress her
strings
doesn't
mean I'm
gay
softly deep
and pounding
free
when joined
with boyfriend
marshal
takes her
to another
place
with neighbours
fraught
and fines
applied
although she
weighs a tonne
5kgs to be
exact
I sit

to play

my Ruby...

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Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Fleur

Ruby and Marshall ? hmmmm I bet they make beautiful music together :PLOL I loved your poem its awesome loved the little laugh, fines and such LOL ;) awesome write darlin its again another winner :) love and hugz Jayne x x x x We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall ...
Fleur MacDonald

Fleur MacDonald

16 years 8 months ago

I'm currently

doing a painting of Ruby. Thanks Jayne you are such a blessing to this site!! Hope your feeling ok and everything is going ok!!! :)fleur xxxxx
Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

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lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Fleur.

How beautiful, and nice to see a new one of yours. Hope Marshal makes just as much beautiful music with u too and not just with Ruby?.Lol. A very instrumental write. Well done. Lyz
Fleur MacDonald

Fleur MacDonald

16 years 8 months ago

Thanks lyz

I'm afraid that Marshal can only make the music louder, he's an Amp and Ruby is a electric guitar. He's also a good little foot stool too. Glad you liked it. :)fleur
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mantiscepter

16 years 8 months ago

Red

Very mellow yellow, or should I say strung out tight. I enjoyed this writing. Was so in tune. Mantiscepter