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Las Profundidades Del Océano
I slowly unbolt my eyes
And there I lay on the rough beach,
The waves booming at my feet.
The sea seems to meet with the sky
Prominent as a single line
In the 180 degree vision of my eyes
I discard my clothes,
Throwing them to the sand
Safely away from the tide.
The water is warm when my skin collides
In time, I’m up to my waist,
The sensation of swirling water is soothing to my skin
I’m a hundred meters off the shore
When I feel the ocean floor decline
It drops out from underneath me.
Depth becomes harder to define
I maintain swimming, almost fleeing
Advancing further out
Glancing, turning ‘round
I want the land, to expand,
To be my new horizon.
My muscles begin to tighten,
I wonder if I’ll cramp up
If hungered sharks will appear
I don’t desire to die out here,
I don’t desire to drown,
I don’t want to be found, alone
Floating face down
Yet I seem to keep swimming,
The swell, gently lifting
And I keep drifting in doubt.
‘Till I’m almost a kilometer out,
My toe finds something more solid
My other foot softly lands down on it,
Could I have found solace?
AH HA! I’ve found a sandbar,
A small isle concealed under water.
I can walk again, sort of,
The ocean lapping at my knees.
I take a few steps
And then sit down wherever I please
My legs crossed, my arms back,
The gentle swell, slapping at my neck,
And I sit there for hours, Sand at my heels
Contemplating, formulating ideals
Watching as the clouds move in, surreal
But obstructing the night sky.
It begins to rain, and I raise my face to comply,
Eyes closed, I open my mouth wide.
Drops aplenty are devoured
But when I revive my eyes,
I’m back on the beach
Within reach of my clothes.
Confused, I use my garments as pillows,
Curl up, fetal position, leave recollection a haze
And fall asleep upon a hollow
‘Till forever and a day.
Critiques
lyz
16 years 9 months ago
Hi again
Bosscombat
16 years 9 months ago
:)
Seren
16 years 9 months ago
Dear Matty ,
Bosscombat
16 years 9 months ago
:)