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Sep 02, 2009
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Breathe.
Breathe In.
Once his hand held your heart.
Now his fingers flick away the tears.
He tells me things will get better, time will heal all.
What the hell would he know, he's not the one who's about to fall.
Breathe out.
He tells me that our friendship will last,
Though he'll never hold me, we can't forget the past.
HIs eyes tell me, he no longer cares.
And his words justify, all that his eyes bare.
Breathe In.
I know the reason why, the truth is plain to see.
He surely is in love, but his heart no longer beats for me.
I've seen the way he looks at her, it's the same way she looks at him.
I've been a fool to hold back my tears, I'm now full to the brim.
Breathe out.
Don't forget to breathe, never quit the fight.
My eyes follow him, untill he's out of sight.
I fall to the ground, and cup my face in my hands.
My heart has been broken.
Breathe In. Keep going.
Don't forget to exhale.
Once his hand held your heart.
Now his fingers flick away the tears.
He tells me things will get better, time will heal all.
What the hell would he know, he's not the one who's about to fall.
Breathe out.
He tells me that our friendship will last,
Though he'll never hold me, we can't forget the past.
HIs eyes tell me, he no longer cares.
And his words justify, all that his eyes bare.
Breathe In.
I know the reason why, the truth is plain to see.
He surely is in love, but his heart no longer beats for me.
I've seen the way he looks at her, it's the same way she looks at him.
I've been a fool to hold back my tears, I'm now full to the brim.
Breathe out.
Don't forget to breathe, never quit the fight.
My eyes follow him, untill he's out of sight.
I fall to the ground, and cup my face in my hands.
My heart has been broken.
Breathe In. Keep going.
Don't forget to exhale.
— LiquidSunshine, Sep 02, 2009
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Ravenshakti
16 years 9 months ago
Dear Talia...
LiquidSunshine
16 years 9 months ago
Thank you :)
Hooded Stranger
16 years 9 months ago
Talia
LiquidSunshine
16 years 9 months ago
Much appreciated
Aireal Steed
16 years 5 months ago
wow I really love this poem.