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Sep 01, 2009
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HONEY
She said" time
is money and
and i will be
your honey "and
love not
mentioned at all
Got a rocket in my
pocket and honey
was ready for more
And after a while it
all ends with a smile
honey may now ask
you to leave ,
Because honey has your
money and you may be
back to give her more .
is money and
and i will be
your honey "and
love not
mentioned at all
Got a rocket in my
pocket and honey
was ready for more
And after a while it
all ends with a smile
honey may now ask
you to leave ,
Because honey has your
money and you may be
back to give her more .
— ziggy, Sep 01, 2009
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Bonitaj
16 years 10 months ago
a swift transaction indeed!
ziggy
16 years 10 months ago
honey
lyz
16 years 10 months ago
You dirty boy
ziggy
16 years 10 months ago
who me
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