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HONEY

            She said" time 
             is money and 
               and i will be 
            your honey "and 
                   love not 
            mentioned at all 
           
            Got a rocket in my 
            pocket and honey 
           was ready for more 

            And after a while it 
           all ends with a smile 
           honey may now ask 
                 you to leave ,
             
          Because honey has your 
          money and you may be 
           back to give her more .


— ziggy, Sep 01, 2009

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Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 10 months ago

a swift transaction indeed!

Hello ZIggy! How uncomplicated you make it all sound! Perhaps if we were to simply pay for love "honey" it would be... but then again - some things are priceless and/or have to be paid for with blood,sweat & tears. Enjoyed the write... Bonita j
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ziggy

16 years 10 months ago

honey

enda, patrick collins. hi there , lol this not based on any experience of mine i just wanted to write something funny for a change thanks for the read and vote YOURS ZIGGYYYYYYYY
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lyz

16 years 10 months ago

You dirty boy

Bought a smile to my face, silly pro, how could she not give you a little longer with those lovely Irish eyes. Lol. Whoops, sorry,only a poem? Ha!. Bloody enjoyed this. I needed a smile. Lyz x
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ziggy

16 years 10 months ago

who me

enda, patrick collins. morning lyz ah how nice to wake up to "WHEN IRISH EYES ARE SMILING SURE THEY MELT YOUR HEART AWAY " LOL LOL HA THANK YOU SO MUCH BUDD I JUST GOT A BIT BORED WITH SERIOUS POETRY GLAD IT MADE YOU LAUGH THATS WHAT ITS FOR NICE ONE LYZ X

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