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Mike
Sep 01, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

somehow

Somehow it seems you turned it right...
Right, yet all I can do is write...
Write about this constant, mental fight...
Fight to make it through another night...
Night's too dark - so be my light
Light, now able to see and invite
Invite you to my heart sincerely polite
— Mike, Sep 01, 2009

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Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Michael

This is a really good write but there is something with the last two lines , I stumbled .. I will think on it and get back to you I think this has a lot of potiental ... kind regards Jayne We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall ...
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Mike

16 years 9 months ago

hey there, thanks for your

hey there, thanks for your feedback, I'm lookin' forward to hear about your suggestions.... have a nice day... sincerely, Michael
Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Here is the other star I was

Here is the other star I was holding ... I thought I had left my suggestions here but ? I love your new ending bravo ... nicely done love and hugs Jayne
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Mike

16 years 5 months ago

thanks so much, since you

thanks so much, since you were the insperation to re-edit it.... and it all just fell into place yesterday.... kind regards... michael